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He Loves Me; He Loves Me Not: Chapter 1

Novel By: Quirky Cait

this is my firsy novel so idk how good it is but anyway its about a girl who is going out with a prick and she falls in love with another guy who is wonderful and amazing but then tomas finds out and gets mad and kills her so she is now running around dead and remembering things from her past life but then she starts to live in her present life and not the past View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jun 23, 2011    Reads: 93    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

It was 5am when sam's phone went off. She knew before she looked at her phone that it would be her boyfriend Tomas. Sam slowly rolled over and grabbed her phone from her bedside table.The text message read: Hey baby its me! i love you forever and always! I am thinking bout you!

That would be sweet if he actually meant it. Sam knows damn well that Tomas doesnt love her. He doesnt know what love is let alone how to love someone. He jumps from girl to girl within a week however he has been dating sam for 3 months on and off but their relationship is not good. This happens every couple of days. They fight, he abuses her, and then early in the morning he sends her the same text message every time.

Sam sighs and puts her phone back on the table. She lays back down in bed and falls asleep instantly. She worked a 12 hour shift at work and she was dead tired. Not to mention the fresh cuts a bruises from her fight with tomas earlier. This will be great to explain to sara later. Sara was sam's older sister whom she lives with since their parents died in a tragic accident 8 years ago. Sam remembers that night well. The police knocking on the door at 3am, sara crumpled and broken crying on the couch, all the mysterious gifts and money from people she did not know, and finally sara telling her that mommy and daddy were gone forever and werent coming back again. Sam was 12 and was more observent then people thought. Sara was 17 and she always was always honest and didnt sugar coat anything. Sam thought about all this as she slept. She ended up dreaming about what happened earlier. She woke up half asleep in a panic only to find tomas sitting at the end of her bed. She is fully awake now and she screams bloody murder.


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