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The Gifted Immortals

Novel By: Raquelita15
Romance



THIS SHORT STORY THAT YOU ARE ABOUT TO READ IS A LOVE STORY BETWEEN TWO PEOPLE XAVIER AND
MERCEDES THEY GO THROUGH A LOT OF
TOUGH TRIALS THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER NEVER LEAVES.

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Submitted:May 24, 2011    Reads: 127    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


~BROKEN RULE~
"You can never be known to the world Mercedes; to them you must be claimed as one of the dead." The count told her angrily
"But I want to be a part of the living." she confessed firmly
"You are a vampire, and you WILL be forever more." the counts adviser Desdemona said
"Fine, then forever dead I will be." she told them despite her anxious anxiety to be free from the darkness that claimed her soul
"Yes, are we clear then?" The count asked her
"Yes, Master." she sighed in defeat
"Good, then you are dismissed." The count told her
She slowly walked away, with blood like tears slowly coming out of her dark brown sad depressed eyes. She walked to the cliff outside and just stood there, the wind blew her long brown hair and scattered her bloody tears across her face, she stood there like a statue and thought of how good a normal death would be better than her eternity of darkness. She placed one foot over the edge of the cliff, and was about to place the other one so that way she could step off, but an iced cold hand grabbed her arm, it was her best friend Xavier, his long black hair knotted up from the wind, and his liquid deep red eyes looked at her apologetically
"You know you can't die." he told her coldly
"I know, but I just want to try." she told him
"I won't let you do that." Xavier told her
"Why not? I'll heal." she asked
"I care about you, and I don't want you to be hurt, even if you will
heal." he said
"Why? Why do you care about me like that?" she asked sadly
"I can't even begin to explain it to you, I just grew a deep attachment to you when I first saw you and I guess my attachment to you grew over these thousand years that we have had together." he said
"The Count Forbids it." She said quietly
"I don't care what my father said, I love you, and I can't do anything about it, besides he grew attached to my mother, so WE can too." He said to her with much honesty He leaned in closer until their foreheads touched, she stood there shaking, slightly frightened.
Xavier moved slowly, trying to decide just what he was going to do.
When their lips finally touched, her hands trembled at her sides as
Xavier moved unsteadily grabbing her waist, wrapping his arms around her she feared being caught from the
Counsel's guards so she quickly pushed him away. He was puzzled at her actions.
"Do you not want me?" he asked confusedly
"It's not that, I just can't do this." she told him
"You're still afraid of the counsel?" he asked her She nodded her head.
"I'm the count's son, he won't kill me or else his blood line will end and he knows It." he said
"I'm a- Just stay away from me Xavier." she told him and then she took off, he stood there worried that Mercedes didn't want to be with him. She didn't want to survive in her immortal life any longer, she was determined to escape the hands of her maker, the count, but she didn't want to leave Xavier behind...She knew she had to though.
There was no time to think or hesitate, she left that very night. Back inside the Kingdom walls Xavier waited for Mercedes to come back to the Palace, but he didn't know that Mercedes had left him and everyone else.




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