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"Dominate You..."

Novel By: Spyguy
Romance



Psychology- The study of the mind... Just for to remind... View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jul 23, 2014    Reads: 89    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


For YOU all of you...And you know who you are.

This is a poem, written in response to stimuli from a request...

Then, I later decided to make it into this novel...

The requester knows her demand.

View & respond with this in mind;

"When you visit..., if you can illicit;

And you really make me miss it;

Then, pretty lady you can kiss it":

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For all you subs was this poem given;

From your minds,I've others driven.

It has to start somewhere, it was about ready to begin... She just didn't know it yet, but the world was going to change big time for a small town country girl, become big-city bound...

BEFORE MOVING ON:

PLEASE BE SO KIND AS TO "LIKE"

AS WELL AS COMMENT.

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Emcee pronounces from the front of the room:

"You've all come here today to compete for an opportunity to study under the sensuous, talented hands of the Master Trainer, absolute certainty should prevail in your minds that one, & only one of you'll earn the opportunity for divine connection with your inner soul at the hands of the epitome of experience... Are there any questions?"

I looked around the room at the other approximately 75 varying degrees of gorgeous women & internally suffered a moment of supreme self-doubt... "Do I really belong here?"

"OK..." He continued... "If you're not completely ready & willing to submit your own minds, bodies, & souls to a perfect stranger who you've never met, you've come to the wrong place today, let there be no doubt, this is a contest to find the one person in this room that drips and exudes sensuality, that embodies wanton lust, & that can submit herself completely. We're not looking for what ignorantly self-proclaimed "Experts" would define as "Sexy" or "Beautiful"... We want perfection, & it would surprise you who in this room both doesn't have it, as well as who may... If I haven't scared you off, then line up over there at that door, and we'll get started..."

With that said, he pointed at the door that I'd been discreetly making my way toward, thinking it was the exit, & my nightmare, my dream, & my life as a submissive all began, in one crazy, mixed up reckless, unprepared, glorious moment in time...

As we all walked through the door, I was feeling more & more afraid; Why would he want me? Why would I have a chance? I really don't want to just humiliate myself in public, yet that's what I've done today, isn't it? What do I do from here? I'm not a quitter, a failure, or one to give up easily... I'm a fighter, haven't I brought 7 children into the world? I didn't just roll-over into that, & I'm not willing to just pansy out of this one either... Some of these women have no real life experiences, they've never had any children, or dealt with many of the day to day things that I have...

Well, maybe he won't choose me, but by all that I believe in, it won't be because I didn't give it my best shot... I took the time to come here, & by golly I'm going to give this the best that I can... With that I walked up to the first test, the one that they said was the hardest of all... The one that most of these Hussies can't pass, according to the sign, as well as the whispering of a lot of these other women here, this is one that will break even the strongest of women...

They don't have the discipline they say... Well, THAT'S an area where I can show them a thing or two since I've fought with courts, husband, children, cops, parents, & who knows what else... Yes, that's an area I can win in... I AM A DISCIPLINE... And there's NO WAY that a simple little mirror is going to get the better of me... This one I've got hands down... It's true I might get eliminated later on, but this one I can conquer, this one I WILL WIN...

All I have to do is beat my own self...

(Mental notes of Kelly, one of the students...)

Before you continue, please take the time to "Like" (If you do),as well as to comment on this chapter.

The more you comment, the better it'll get, believe me it works that way...

Here are some to get you started, originally posted on the first publishing:

(BTW) Thanks, in advance...

Sexy Scarlett; You're crazy. You really must be. I love it though. Reading your work is like stepping into a fun house where nothing's quite right and everything is a little trippy, but it's entertaining (and a little creepy at the same time). That's actually meant to be a compliment even if it doesn't come across that way. Posted: May 16, 2013

Author Comment: Thank you for that... I guess you could think of me as a Joker... But I don't kill, hurt people, offend (If I can avoid it), or intentionally harm anyone...

Petersgirl; Is this the end? Will you be posting more? xoxo PG Posted: Aug 21, 2013

Author Comment: Yes, I'll keep it coming as long as there's a warm reception for my rantings, & appreciation for their soothing value...

Kellyannshirley; Perfection is found in all kinds of different places. As usual another great writing. Posted: Nov 6, 2013

Author Comment: Thank you my friend for your kind attention...

Alyson Williams; I am a bit confused... I am enjoying the set-up here and I am glad I have more to read tonight. You leave me intrigued. Posted: Jan 13, 2014

Author Comment: Well, a guy has to pull on your sensitive spots a little bit don't you think, to get you all ramped up for the grand plunge into the waters of bliss? You wouldn't have it any other way would you? If I don't challenge your mind, then all I am doing is pulling on your leg... I think that you of all people would want more than that...

You're the master of the daily schoolroom classes of "The needy" amongst us... You play our minds like the Oak-Ridge Boys play the fiddle in "The Devil Went Down to Georgia", & the great Stevie Wonder plays the keys... I have to admire the talents of your creative brain, & give you a new song to play... If we can play off of each other, then the whole world will sing along... Sing along & enjoy our song...





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