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"Dominate You..."

Novel By: Spyguy
Romance



Psychology- The study of the mind... Just for to remind... View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jul 28, 2014    Reads: 90    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


The Decision:

As I headed home I once again thought to myself... "Could it really be that easy?" Well, I had ninety days, three months; "That's my sons birthday..." I suddenly thought to myself, "... That'll be easy for me to remember..." Two weeks later I was right about that point where I was questioning my sanity... Why did I decide to do this? There are so many things to do... Is this really all that necessary? Would it be all that bad if I didn't do this? There are so many competing for this... Then, that day I got the phone call...

"Hello? Yes, I just called to check on your progress with your promise to the woman in the mirror..." I was stunned; He was calling me? ('Well, it's going Alright, but...') "BUT... You're not one of those whining kinds of women who start something & then don't complete it just because it's a little bit hard, or a little bit of a challenge are you?" ('No') "That's not the kind of person I had you pegged for. I don't think you're like that, are you?" ('No')

"You're a mother of seven children you said, aren't you? You haven't birthed 7 kids, lived with your husbands, raised those kids, kept yourself looking better than Marilyn Monroe in the process... Are you telling me that you've gotten divorced & remarried, & dealt with all the problems life throws at you, dealt with governments, & authorities, police, your 'Ex's new girlfriends', moving to different states, the pressures of raising a family, & all that while still continuing to remain a quitter??"

"That's not who you are is it? Have you quit? Is that really who you are? Did I really make that big of a mistake when I chose to begin believing in you? No...I don't believe it, that's not who you are..." "Wait a minute, did he just say he thinks I look better than Marilyn Monroe?" I asked myself, shaking my head...

('No, I'm not a quitter, I couldn't have been, I had too many people counting on me... But how do you know so much about my life? My marriages, & my difficulties? I never told you abou...')

"No, I didn't think so... So, what's this you were going to say about not being able to keep your promise to yourself? That doesn't sound like you..." Damn, this guy's so aware of things, he knows what I'm going to say before I even say it...

('No, that's not what I meant at all... I just have so many pressures on me as a...') "Wait a minute..., are you going to blame your kids, & family for your chickening out on a promise you made to yourself here? Maybe you aren't the girl I thought you were..." He said, sounding disgusted...

Wait, so he believes in me? He's calling me isn't he? Yeah, & how'd he get my phone number anyway? He has that high of an opinion... Wait, now that low of an opinion of me... How does he know so much? I haven't quit yet, I was just thinking about it...

('First of all buster, I haven't quit ANYTHING... Second, I don't know how you got my number, but I am going to beat all of those little bimbos that you call women, in the whole building over there that you packed with your frilly 'Cheerleader-type' whores... None of them has anything on me, & my experience will win the contest in the end... And third, if you ever want to know about me & my past life, I'd appreciate it if you'd talk with ME about it, not just go off like some kind of a stalker & do your research on the internet... That's one thing that'll make my blood boil & you have no right...')

"Ha Ha Ha... So, I was right about you, you do have a feisty side of you? I was beginning to think you were just a little lamb... Good girl... I'm proud of you... You stay strong, just like that, & I'll be working directly with your fiery little self image directly, very soon... You DO have it in you, congratulations my dear, you passed test #3, & you didn't even know it... I'll be watching for you at the club..." And with another laugh, he hug up...

Arrogant prick, I thought to myself, then had to laugh as I realized how he'd tricked me into recommitting to myself what I'd decided to accomplish... I'm going to thank him someday for caring for me so very much... It's about me... Some day... How can a stranger care that much? The next two & a half months went by pretty quickly after that... Daily visits to the mirror, life, troubles, kids, and yes, life... But, even though I didn't understand why, I did get 2 more of those "Reminder" calls from him, this time encouraging me & praising me for my faithfulness...

Soon it was the day for our return to the club... I was very nervous, I felt like my legs were jelly as I walked in, looking again at all of those picturesque perfect 10's... But, in some small way, I wasn't really nervous at all about the competition... I saw their beauty, but I recognized that I had just as many valuable & noteworthy qualities, or more, than they did with all their superficial beauty... Though some of them, I now realized, had a greater depth than just beauty... I heard it in their voices, & saw it in the way they stood, & the way that they spoke to their peers, THOSE, I suddenly realized, were my TRUE competition, those would be the ones that he would see... The others wouldn't have even a chance...

As that thought came to me, suddenly there were really only about 5 women in the whole room... Of course, there all 100 or so of them were still standing there, but only around 5-6 were still in the running to compete... As I suspected, a list of about 98 names was posted, & the rest of us had our names called one by one & were pulled out from the room to be taken to other rooms to sit & wait, then given a nice buffet lunch, like I've never experienced before, & then had a chance to talk directly with my mentor as I've affectionately begun to call him...

Of those who were left? I can only guess that they were sent home politely, being told that they hadn't qualified... Or, maybe they were assigned to a different mentor... I wonder if I could have taken that... I'm glad I didn't have to...

"What's that my honored one...? Am I almost finished with this? Yes, my sweet love, I've got a special surprise for you... I've been dreaming about all night long... I really want to know how it'll make you feel when I..."

(The rest of the sentence got cut off as she regally crossed the kitchen floor, then entered & closed the bedroom door...)

Reviews? See what's been said...

HeyTi; Reading this made me go and take a good look at myself in the mirror. Am I doing my best to be the good wife, & mother, a sister and a friend. Am I being true to myself? I love the story. Posted: Jul 4, 2014

Author Comment: I'm sooooo glad you said that... That type of response is the ultimate goal of most of my works... They aren't simply done for a quick one-time meaningless read, most of my works have much meaning, double meanings, &/or even at times, multiple meanings. I also wanted this story to touch the Daughter of God within all of you sweet women & get you to realize that you are & can be so much more than you ever imagine that you can be...

Acohb; So original... can't wait for the next update. Posted: Apr 2, 2014

Author Comment: Glad you liked it... I'm working on it, I've just had a lot to do lately...

Kellyannshirley; Even as I have wept day in and day out mornings at the mirror with my reflection staring back at me five things said, not a myth; My honor still intact, my promise has been kept... Posted: Oct 29, 2013

Author Comment: Prouder of an Angel, I can't say I'd be... If within my reach you were, a kiss reward would be... As it is so far away, & hard to compensate... Faith I need to excersize, reward you have found great... Betty Davis with her eyes, & Dolly with her chest... Haven't even in their days, approached you at your best...

Alyson Williams; Interesting! I have to go back and reread to understand where you are going with this. Giving me lots to think about and I like when a writer does that. thank you. Posted: Jan 13, 2014

Author Comment: Thank you... I'm re-writing Dominate to be more dominating... As that has been the request of some of the most lovely of the flowers in God's Garden, with regard to what I'm doing with it. Since my lovely, fragrant flowers want to be dominated, I can hardly find the heart to disappoint them... Wouldn't you agree that it's a very different twist that it's taking now? Do you think you'll enjoy the new turn of things? Even if you'll have to be willing to accept the challenge, be willing to give me a part of you to be dominated, at least if you truly want to be aware of & fully understand what's going on? Is that something that you're willing to do?

Alyson Williams; I definitely like the idea of a BDSM story - with a solid Dom approach - it is what the title implies. I have to believe you really did a huge rewrite on this since the previous comments don't seem to match what I just read. I do like your writing and look forward to where this goes - I truly want to be aware of & fully understand what's going on. Posted: Jan 13, 2014

Author Comment: Thank you for your input... I'll try my best to make the final product one that'll leave you breathless, or at least a little pale... HaHaHa... You deserve to be treated with a delicate approach, since you are such a delectable writer...

Petersgirl; Why yes Master I would love some more of this....please. Don't make me beg you...unless you like that and then I would gladly do so. xoxo PG Posted: Jan 18, 2014

Author Comment: Yes... Beg, but make sure that you are true first and formost to yourself... I love to grant the wishes of my sweet little subservient angels, since the whole world senses their happiness, & glories in the bright rays of sunshine from their eyes... To please you gives me flight... How come you have not called me my dear? I thought you wanted to talk... Your call would be a siren's call & welcome any time... Unless I'm in the middle of something I'm not able to leave, I'd attend to your desire as best I'm able, & I would be appreciateing the call... You wouldn't be dedicating yourself to a different Dom now would you? ...That wouldn't serve you well my Little Donna May, smiling like a bright spring day... Where did you go?? Why'd you go away?





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