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Novel By: stephhlebreton
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Paris is a new girl is a new town after her mother and gradfather make her move after their news. Paris, not being what you would call a 'pleasant character', absolutely deads the town the minute she arrives. But before she knows it she is making friends and ememies and the one special boy who could save her life...whatever is left of it. View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 28, 2008 Reads: 373 Comments: 19 Likes: 11
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Interesting Steph.
Posted: Mar 30, 2008
Well, this is short and sweet and definitely catches the attention. One is compelled to read on to at least find out who or what is having this experience, and what is the experience! Because it's in italics, one suspects it might be a dream, but I'll hold off on that until I read chapter 2.
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
short and simple, gets to the point which makes it gripping. thats how i try to be with my more recent work. off to read chapter 2! so far it sounds really interesting and good.
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
Wow! Your grammar is really good! And you really set the stage for an awesome sounding story-- have you read Twilight before? I'm deffinitely reading more:)!
Lot's of special chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
I can't believe I hadn't read this earlier! I meant to like yesterday then I had to go to bed and then today was pretty busy so I kinda forgot SHAME ON ME because this is totally awesome!
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
So far it's good!
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
Steph, this is an intriguing intro! I can't wait to get reading the first chapter. :) ~ Nixie
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
wow steph. well, as I alredy told you, I really like it. HAH I get the sneek peaks before all the other people read it, whooo!
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
Hi Steph, there r few spelling mistakes. Otherwise it really caught my attention.Well done.Liked it.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Tor Steinsland
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Very nice intro, short and to the point.
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
Yes, very intriguing! I love the idea of someone dying as the beginning of a story. Need to read more!
Posted: May 1, 2008
Interesting....I'll keep reading.
-josee-
Posted: May 18, 2008
Very interesting start^.^
Posted: May 18, 2008
darn! I have to sit down and read it! must add to my reading list!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! thanks for asking me to read it!
Posted: May 18, 2008
Im definately going to read this, it sounds so interesting. Can't wait!
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Posted: May 21, 2008
Interesting
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
woooo di di dum!
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
chilling, liking it do far!
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
Very interesting beginning. The death of a main is compelling, because where do you go from there? How can there be a story after that? Now I must read on to answer those questions.
Great job!
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
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