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Paris is a new girl is a new town after her mother and gradfather make her move after their news. Paris, not being what you would call a 'pleasant character', absolutely deads the town the minute she arrives. But before she knows it she is making friends and ememies and the one special boy who could save her life...whatever is left of it. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 Reads: 63 Comments: 10 Likes: 5
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ahhhh, that was AWESOME, esecially the suspence at the end...I can tell the next chapter is gonna be awseome@! I love class trips:P
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
I'm half way done and i think this Michelle girl is a freak and has something to do with the demon!
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
never mind maybe she is trying to protect her too?
but i don't no why when she has Tristan.
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
lmao 'fear' Stephie - la.
well it was very good but yea if i was her i would be freaking out. i would crap myself lol.
but go and see Tristan first.:)
i lovveddd it baby!
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
I am hooked girl. It was easier to give up sodas than to wait for the next chapter! Get to writing:) I can't wait to see who it is!
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
OMG, This is AMAZING. Ahh, I can't believe this guy is soo creepy. Anyways, Apdate soon!!!!
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
ahhh!!!
wheres the next chapter??????????????
I need the next chapter
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Lovedd it
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Posted: Aug 21, 2008
After a long long time but it's worth the wait...i was always a big fan of this novel...u knw what, do consider publishing this one...honestly...the suspense is increasing with each chapter BUT where is the next chapter ?? POST SOON
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Posted: Aug 21, 2008
Omg yummy a looooong post. All the better for my imaginative mind XD.... Okay Ill actually start reading this now....
- 35 minutes later-
Holy crap! What the...How'd....Ugh! Im like so flustered. Bet if food could talk mine would be saying "Jesus what is wrong with this girl?!? One minute shes happy the next shes happy confused shocked and some other emotion I do not know since I am only food" LOL. But seriously what the heck! This trip is so not going to be good...
Lol. Mr. Gregory is the geography teacher. Funny how close those words are: Gregory and Geography. Lol just something I noticed XD
I so bet the thump sound Paris heard on her roof was Tristan making a not so graceful landing. I blame sleep deprivation! I should know, Im sleep deprived as we speak and Ive walked into a few walls today not to mention trip over things. I mean Im a clumsy person but today was just ridiculous DX.
Okay I think I rambled a bit.. not to sure but yeah. So loving the story steph. Update soon :)
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
First off, I have to let you know, that I did read this chapter when you first left me the message, it's just my old computer fried~fried~fried, all the way to the mother board~ahh! So, I've been playing catch up now that I have a new computer finally~ there. That said, here goes...
'Molly on the other hand, looks utterly thrilled.'
(I really laughed at this one, good humor~)
Wow, I would certainly be scared if I were her, that was creepy~lol. Well, can't wait for more~it has to be quite the trip right?
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
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