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Raspberry Blood

Novel By: xxxNightxxxWalkerxxx
Romance


This is the story of a girl who is doomed to a hopless life until she is rescued by vampires. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

Submitted: Jul 4, 2008    Reads: 123    Comments: 9    Likes: 0   


"So where do you want to go first Violet?" Jordan asked as we continued walking through the many halls, just trying to decide what to do. Violet and I still had our arms looped while his arms were deep in his pockets.

"It doesn't matter I suppose" I said, shrugging slightly.

"Let's go into town! We can show her around. I need to get a couple things anyway" Lily suggested merrily.

"Right, let me just grab my cloak then" Jordan said, stopping at a door and entered, closing it.

"So looks like you've taken a fancy to him" Lily said grinning smugly.

"Well he's pretty cool I guess" I said, rolling my eyes like it was no big deal. I really hoped she would drop it because I didn't even have a hold on those feelings yet. Whatever they were. "Mmhm..." She said, raising her eyebrow like she didn't believe it. That's ok though because atleast she dropped it. Seeing as Jordan came out a moment later, it was a good thing she did. He had a long light brown trench coat on over his jeans and t-shirt.

"Ready to go?" He asked, smiling. It amazed me how innocent a supposed creature of sin could smile.

"For sure!" Lily exclaimed, jumping a little. I just smiled shyly, nodding. I had never been really very outgoing, unlike Lily. We had such split personalities, it was like we were each other's alter ego manifested into bodies. She grabbed my arm and started pulling me along with her at a faster speed than I had ever gone at even when running. Jordan was able to keep up, no problem. It wasn't that suprising. He was fast too. In no time, we were standing in front of the tallest door I had seen yet and I had seen a lot of doors lately. It was dark red glass, I was afraid to touch it. It appeared to be incredibly fragile. Lily laughed at my expression and walked up to the door. With an iron fist, she threw a punch, and I gasped expecting it to shatter. I was suprised when it didn't even make a sound. My jaw dropped.

"It's the hardest stone in Valgarsi. No one vampire could get through and that's hard to come upon. Remember Twilight" Jordan answered my unasked question.

"Oh, it looks like glass" I said, still amazed.

"On earth it is. Anything strong in Valgarsi, turns weak on earth. Except vampires" Lily added, the last part laughing befor pushing open the door. She held it for us and I walked out of the castle walls. Everything was so overwhelmning to take in. The sky was cloudless and looked more like ice than water like back on earth. The sun in the air looked like it was in the midst of an Eclipse, but it didn't seem to be passing like a regular one. There were trees all around that made it seem like it was fall but last time I checked, it was the middle of summer. Very far in the distance, I could vaguely make out a cluster of little buildings.

"It'll be faster if we go at our speed Vy" Lily said. I knew that ment that someone would have to help me or something seeing as I wasn't exactly a vampire at the moment.

"So Jordan, you'll have to carry her" Lily said grinning, all innocent like. My eyes widened before I glared at her. She could just as well carry me and she knew it. I was just about to point that out when in a flash, she was gone. In the distance, I could already see the trees shifting in a consistant pattern towards where I assumed was the village was. I really would have to remember to kill her later. True I didn't really know how to kill a vampire but I'd sure try. I gave a little shriek of suprise as I felt two strong arms pick me up bridal style. I opened my eyes which I had subconciously to find myself staring into Jordan's mischievious green ones. "Hold on tight" he said before taking off, in pace with the wind.

"I feel like a regular Bella" I said quietly, staring on in wonder as the scenery passed by in a blur of colors like paint.

"I guess I'm your Edward then" I heard Jordan say, causing my cheeks to burst aflame.

"I suppose so" I said, looking at my hands which were fidgeting like crazy.

"Anyway, I'd hardly call you normal" He said, sending a cheeky grin my way. I wondered how he could look down at me while running and not manage to run into anything in our path through the forest. I looked forward, seeing him dodge tree by tree in our way. I looked back up at him to see him still looking at me.

"How do you do that?" I asked incredulously.

"Do what?" He asked, quizzical.

"Dodge every obstical without seeing it" I answered. "Instinct" he said, grinning proudly. "I'm impressed" I said, a small laugh escaping my lips. Finally we had arived at what I was now sure was the village. Beautiful vampires walked the street, most with a mate or child at their side. Lily stood leaning against a tree at the very beginning of the village.

"What took you two so long?" She asked, smirking.

"I was going slow so she wouldn't get sick" Jordan said quickly. I raised an eyebrow at him. That was slow? I don't know if I wanted to see fast.

"So let's get going! I want to show you some things. Introduce you to some of my friends. The works!" Lily said, not bothering to hide her excitement. I smiled brightly. I was excited too. To meet some more people would be exciting. It made me wonder if everyone else who lived here was as nice as Jordan and my parents.

Jordan

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Sorry it was so short. A longer one will be up tomorrow I promise.


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Comments:

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haha Jordan be smexy c[:

I find it funny that the limit is by words and not letters or anything i mean what if it is a bunch of long words for my comment like supercalafragalisticexpialadosous not like I can spell or anything

anyway back to talk of the story
me like lol

wow im a sucky commenter

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes that was what I was going for! Haha, you're random, but aren't we all at times? Glad you like it!

just popping in
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of course I'm random c[:
lol I'm me
conversations with me can get pretty random
and also slightly strange
heh

and since I am commenting again
I should say something about the story

I am looking forward to what you are going to write and I'm really hoping it has a bit of a twist without being cliche

lol Idk I just really don't like it if the main characters get together right away

buuuuuuuuuuuuuut that's just my preferance and you are the author

also yes we do all get random
among other things :D
p.s. what if someone uses really short words and is very talkitive what then O.o

>.

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I guess I kind of like that too, but who says they will? Besides, connections can be made really easily even by first site. And that doesn't mean necisarily that they'll get together right away. There are many obsticals such as: denial, confusion, etc. There's still a long way to go, or we'd have no story now would we? :p I'm random most of the time. So....blah.

just popping in
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ughh it was suppose to say >.<

p.s.s hehe I got first dibs on this chapters commenting board
c[:
ok I'm done with my useless babble

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha! You're weird...which makes you cool!

MMMOOOORRREEEE PLZ

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

It's a commin!

just popping in
(not registered user)

YYYYYYYYYEEEEEESSS!!! I'm cool

yeah and I never said that it would be those two
I was just saying
I mean for all I know another character could come in the next chapter

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Two true. Hmm...that is something to think about. Hmmm....I think you just gave me a good idea. Thanks a bunch!

just popping in
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yeah don't think I'm just popping in anymore

uh oh I gave u an idea lol
and just remember to try and keep off the cliches
:D

so yeah
I've been commenting this page a lot
wow
lol

maybe you should get out that next chapter so there's a page I haven't filled up *wink wink*
c[:
and I think part of the reason I keep commenting is because you comment back
lol
soooo....

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Well the only reason I comment back is I feel the need to comment on any comment that is given to my story.

greaatttttt

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe, I know.

ooh Jordan=yummy ;)

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Isn't he?!

O.!.
M.!.
G.!.

tlk bout HOTT.!.

Jordan iis gorgeous.!.

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha I know right?! I am so sorry that I haven't updated. I got my computer taken away in September and that's the only reason I haven't continued. I really wish I could have but I wont get it back until I'm 18 which is five years from now. So I'm really sorry.



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