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Locked Heart

Novel By: ZAE

A boy from the past who broke her little sister's heart, is back. Liz is still out for revenge against him for doing that to her little sister Gracie. But it doesn't go as plan and some things start to develop. View table of contents...


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Submitted:May 12, 2013    Reads: 27    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


I land the car with precision. My past expirences making it mostly smooth. But the car's still sliding. I block my sister's screaming out and jerk the wheel causing us to make a sharp turn. We spin to the right leaving donut marks in the grass and stop facing the school and the parking lot. I sit there my already wild brown hair even more wild and windblow. Then a huge smile cracks my face and I start laughing.

"That was AMAZING!!! I've never tried that with a car." I scream. My sister's finally shut up, I think I might have put her into shock..... Oh well. "Gracie you okay?" I ask any ways. Her head snaps up and I just see the hatred boiling on her face.\

"What were you thinking!!!!" Gracie yelled.

"Gracie calm down, its over." I begged.

"NO I WILL NOT!!!" Gracie grabs her bag and flings the door open and steps out.

"Gracie, WAIT! I'm sorry." I say but I can tell she's still mad. She slams the car door leaving me alone with Luke. I watch her walk away.

"Why is she like that Luke?" I ask.

"Liz she's just going through a rough time thats all with what happened and with your dad always being away." he says with sincerity.

"Yeah I know but I just don't know why she blocks me out sometimes and why she's always yelling at me, I'm trying to do my best." I sigh and shake my head.

"Liz that's something for you to ask, I don't know how Gracie thinks." Luke says as he grabs his backpack and slings it on.

"You right I'll try too ask her, how i don't know but I will." I say as I take my keys out and grab my backpack.

"You ready for another day of this nightmare and we're still on for tonight right?" I ask.

"Yeah we are, they say alot of people are coming tonight and yeah I am." Luke says as he pops the door open.

"Okay then lets go." I say as I open the door and step into the blinding light.


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