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The Only Love Song

Poem By: Aleksander Azrael
Romance


A poem about a guy who is in love with a girl but her parents don't want him to be with her. It's generic and cliche, but I'm proud of this one. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 9, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   


Nowhere to run,

Nowhere to hide now,

Because you know just how,

I fell in love under butterfly wings.

 

Nowhere to run,

Can’t leave without you,

And I know you feel this way too,

So don’t you wave goodbye.

 

Take my hand,

And hold it tight,

They won’t tear me lose tonight,

They’ve got no right.

 

Don’t let go – don’t wave goodbye,

This is the only love song I’ll ever write,

So please don’t put your heart in anyone else’s hands,

Please give your heart to me.

 

Nowhere to run,

Please let me keep you,

Everyday feels so brand new,

Every time you lie in my arms.

 

Nowhere to run,

Won’t let them take you,

Don’t care what they do,

‘Cause you’re something worth dying for.

 

Take my hand,

And hold it tight,

They won’t tear me lose tonight,

They’ve got no right.

 

Don’t let go – don’t wave goodbye,

This is the only love song I’ll ever write,

So please don’t put your heart in anyone else’s hands,

Please give your heart to me.

 

We’re only here for one last night,

So scream it from the rooftops,

Throw your fears into the sky,

And give your heart to me tonight.

 

Don’t let go – don’t wave goodbye,

This is the only love song I’ll ever write,

So please don’t put your heart in anyone else’s hands,

Please give your heart to me.

 

Scream it from the rooftops,

Tell me that you love me . . .


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Comments:

Ahhh, Alek I think you have a heart of gold. Very nice job and I don't think the senitment is cliche at all. Love it probably the one thing we can all understand. I'm going to go read it again!

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

HaHaHa! You're too funny, Dragonfly. I'm glad you liked it so much.

Sorry, I forgot to say that there was one line that I especially liked "I fell in love under butterfly wings". It was very whimsical and sweet.

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you liked it.

That was my favorite line as well, you did an extremely good job Alex. I LOVE it!

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, Chris. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

that said Alek, my finger slipped. :D

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I see. But I wonder - how did your finger slip from on side of the keyboard to the other? Just joking. Thanks for reading.

Wow alek, you have captured the felings odf love really well.
Good job. ^^

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, Punishment. It's always good to recieve praise from the king of love poems. =)

cliche, but cute an well written!!! come check some of my stuff out!!k?

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.



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