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This isn't my best but I like the backround behind it. Tell me what you think it means.
though im sure its very obvious.
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Submitted: Jul 20, 2008 Reads: 76 Comments: 10 Likes: 4
Like a Cup of Tea
By: Ally D.
What if you could hold me,
In your arms for a night,
What if you could kiss me,
throughout the long night.
What if she didn't matter,
nor did he.
What if all the Obstacles could be gone,
Like sweet sugar in a cup of hot tea.
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You know what just popped into my head? This movie I saw a preview for called 'He's just not that into you' XD Ut just reminded me of that.
I liked the last two lines a lot :)
Posted: Jul 20, 2008
hi! ally. i can visualize myself in the first situation and i like that (very much). and the second situation doesn't matter, for the first holds my entire attention.
tell me, tell me. my grey cells aren't active. i'm a face-value reader and not a delve-deeper one. i enjoy the surface and exchange pleasantries and wham bham thank u. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 20, 2008
this is actually sweet.........and you have left the reader to wonder ....so im sure you'll be getting all kinds of interpretations for this one!
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
cute!!!!!!
luving it!!1
chek out summa mine, [i need the advice]
xx. nikki
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
Awehhhh!! I love it soooooo much!!! xD Its like.. just AWEEEHH!! It reminded me of me and my b/f before we were dating. ^-^
Good job Ally!
Keep it up.
~Megan
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
sooo sweet! (like sugar. haha). i liked it!! i liked how you found similarities between tea and relationships!
~Lemon
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
awww, so adorable ally. I really really liked it, it made me smile:P
STeph(:
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
Very sweet poem. I like the idea of all worries and obstacles melting away like sugar dissolving in hot tea. Hot tea itself is warm and soothing, like being held in a lover's arms. I liked it!
Stephanee :)
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
sweet.. although i dont like tea..!
Posted: Jul 23, 2008
lovely wording, ally! awesome work, keep it up!
Posted: Aug 9, 2008
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