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You'll Always be my Thunder

Poem By: An Excuse To Speak Of You
Romance

Tags: poem, poetry, love, eternity, special, future, romance

I get off the phone with her, and miss her. I listen to our songs, and they just make me cry the lovliest of tears. I'm not one to cry alot, but I love her soo much, they just come out of me. Our Love is Beautiful. My favorite of our songs is Thunder by Boys Like Girls. View table of contents...

Submitted: Jan 18, 2008 Reads: 892 Comments: 17 Likes: 3

It's a long walk of Life,

To walk it alone.

I want you to hold my hand,

As we take on a load

of love, and pain.

I listen to our song and cry.

You know exactly why.

My Life is yours.

For you my Love Soars.

To the highest Mountan...

To the brightest Star.

I Will always Love you.

Because of who you are.

It takes alot to Love,

And If you take it for granted...

It's Gone...

I Will Love you, and Hold onto you,

Until my heart gives out.

Why do I cry whenever I listen to our song?

Because You were my love All Along.

My Love is yours.

For you my Heart Soars.

To the highest Mountan...

To the brightest Star.

I Will always Love you.

Because of who you are.

And I wanna Wake up next to you.

I wanna smell your hair.

I wanna Squeeze you,

Like you just had a nightmare

I will love you More than anything.

You Love me more than anything.

I want you right next to me...

A Perfect eternity...

And my life is yours.

And Your life is mine.

Take my heart,

Lock it away,

Right next to yours.

Your the only one for me...

You'll always be my Thunder.

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Comments:

whitehart

Great poem. Don't I always wish to meet love like that? Great writing. Regards~Deb

Posted: Jan 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you soo much!

Checkered Faces

That made me cry, love.

I'm sitting here in English, crying...

I love you.

Posted: Jan 18, 2008

Author Comment:

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! I LOVE YOUUUUUU! I'm sorry you cried in class!!! I'm soooooo glad, though, that you loved it!!!

Twilightangel

I like your poem!! leave me an comment some time.

Posted: Jan 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok, thanks!

ezzy

WOW man those are powerful words. Too bad I feel uncomfortable to express my love to my lover but he understands, it just it makes me feel bad that he does express and show and I don't much. I try so hard, I really do; hey how do you get the courage to express love, I find it hard. Man, I am a newbie with love.

Posted: Jan 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Don't feel bad, to tell you the truth, I was a newbie before her, and it took me loosing her to get it right. When she came back to me, I realized, "Hey I love her more than anything, and i want to let her know, I dont wannt to loose her again!" So I just let my inner feelings out! I would stop being afraid and just say what I truly felt. I really, REALLY hope you can express your love! Just remember, You Love him, and you wanna let him know, and he will love you even more, I bet on it! Good luck! Let me know if I helped any!

Alcaeus Uilleag

i really liked it... its really sweet

Posted: Feb 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw, Thanks. My feelings for her are really strong. It just works out poetically I guess.

hiddenfayt

I loved it!
I love how you care so much for her, there aren't many guys out there that actually care for his girl like this. :) Great job! My heart melted with your words.

Posted: May 20, 2008

KacyisdaSHIT

i love this, even though it made me cry because
i just also when through a hard break up. && i love that song

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

julistar

thanks for this poem, you made me curious about the song and it is just as beautiful as your creation here.

"Your voice was the soundtrack of my summer."

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

jmevee

Superb poem. Simply superb. Thanks for sharing.

You may like some of my work - there's a similar theme. I'll definitely check out more of yours now....

'And my life is yours.
And Your life is mine.'

Simple, but something very few people truly understand. Well done.

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

lexie

THUNDER. wow, i've heard of stars sunshine and ... but not thunder, it was nice a bit of reality with true love. good job. all the best.. lexie

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Rocky

Nice love poem, you explained love in such a happy way, you sound not at all miserable, you sound happy to be in love, don't stop writing.

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Nomurcee187

Might I make a suggestion or two. Reading your poem I felt the immense pain you were suffering however, I tired quickly of reading the word "love" over and over again. Try expanding your range by using a Thesaurus and pull your reader into the depth of your soul. The facade of a poem often does not entail the heartwrenching interlude that the person is experiencing within--show me that and I'll give you two thumbs up! From what I read, you do have promise and I alone may be your best critic because I believe honesty toward the writing of a poet is the best medicine s/he can receive. Your poem was good but I truly think you could write much deeper and fully explore your emotions inside and out. Good Luck!! I hope to see if you can meet my challenge to you. :)

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Yeux

That was amazing.
Great poetry is right before my eyes.
Of course, you have to have a lot of emotion in your heart to bring it out into writing.
Great job!
May your love for each other last for eternity:)

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Armani
(not registered user)

wow man u relly killed it i can tell that u write this poem from exprience, great poem.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

tony c
(not registered user)

dude that poem rocks .I'm in England and my girls in New zealand Your words express so much of how I feel right now thank you
I am just emailing it to her hope she enjoys it as much as me .
Peace

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Alice Oiseau

oh my gosh i love this poem. mainly b/c Thunder is one of my songs that i have for my special someone. and the poem itself was incredible! sooo heartfelt and beautiful :)
keep up the wonderful writing! ^^

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

moonella

oh man i dream of this love and want it. i love the peom so much!

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

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