Submitted: Apr 21, 2008
Reads: 52
Comments: 8
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I never really knew you
You were just another friend
But when I got to know you,
I let my heart unbend.
I couldn't help past memories
that would only make me cry
I had to forget my first love
and give love another try
So I've fallen in love with you
and I'll never let you go
I love you more than anyone
I just had to let you know
And if you ever wonder why
I don't know what I'll say
But I'll never stop loving you
each and every day
My feelings for you will never change
Just know my feelings are true
Just remember one thing
I Love You!
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Comments:
good rhyme scheme, it's got a sweet feel to it =)
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
It is common for repitition to hinder the feeling of a poem, but I am not surprised to find that it did not here. The repitition gave a feel of importance and meaning to the words, and thusly, the poem itself.
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
yeahh that is cute :):)
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
really great rhyming poem loved it.....
Posted: Apr 22, 2008
phenomenal. i think this is the only pem that i hadn't read by you. well now i've read everything and i can't wait to hear more. take care.
Lydia_xxxx
Posted: May 11, 2008
Your future bf and supreme sadist matt
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Omg and you say i'm good, your bloody FANTASTIC *Love heart's the poem* Just omg it's awesome, rly awesome
Posted: May 15, 2008
*almost bout 2 cry*
dis is so GOOD...u made a poem bout romance and i love reading this kind of romance...give dis a 15.5 out of 10, cause its like u know the type of romance i like read/watch.
Posted: May 23, 2008
That's A Really Sweet And Loving Poem.Straight To The Point.
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
