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I Need You With Me

Poem By: ashen
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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 97    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


I need you,

And the comfort of your embrace.

I need your warmth in the cold of this world.

I need someone to wipe away my tears.

I need someone to hold me,

And someone I can hug when I feel alone.

I would give you my heart,

If you would trust me with yours.

I need your love.

I need you, so much.

Your reassuring gaze is all I need to brave through the day.

But will that ever happen?

Even if I need you,

You may never come.

I am I wishing on something too good to be true?

Maybe I’ve been waiting too long.

I need a savior to rescue me from what I am inside.

I don’t want to be afraid,

But I am.

I need you with me,

By my side.

Together we can help fight each other’s battles,

And only together can we conquer them.

We will no longer be alone,

Because we will have each other.

I imagine your soft touch on my face,

Your calming words when all goes wrong.

I’m sorry,

But I need you more than you know.

And I realize we may never be.

Everyday I'm not with you,

Things get worse,

And a piece of me goes numb,

And my heart is slowly turning into stone,

And pricking me like ice.

Soon I will be too gone to save,

Because no one cares.

As much as I look at your picture,

You will never be here.


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Comments:

So sad, I am almost crying. I've been going through something like this lately, and I know it's not a good feeling. I could really feel the pain and hurt through these words. Very well written. Love it. ^^

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww, I'm sorry. =[ I'm glad you liked it though =]

Love love, lost love..

--Tally

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah...thanks for reading =]

this is really touching-deep and longing-so meaningful-I know I long to find my true love one day and get lost in their embrace-but when and if???XS before it is too late??? and my own heart turns to stone xXx*Meg*xXx

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah.. I know how you feel. Thanks so much ^^

I know how this feels....And i so not like that feeling!!
Very well written ashen^_^

Take care:)

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much ^^

Very touching.

Posted: Aug 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. :]



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