Wow Danielle, I know just how you feel. It's hard when the person you love is oblivious to how much you really care about them. It's hard, but somethimes you just have to take the chance. They'll either care about or they won't. It's always best to find out in the begining so you don't end up hurting for a long time while in the dark. Great poem.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

I can honestly relate to this as well...not knowing how, when, or if you should tell the person how you really feel about them...and it's like killing a part of you inside. I have gone through this, especially with one particular person in mind, and basically I was mocked, or rejected, after he had led me to believe that he really was interested in a relationship with me...the problem was, that once I finally, after many, many months of "just being friends"...yet somehow "dating also"...I finally spoke up and confessed my true feelings for him, and he basically said "I don't know...there might be someone else"....and then, get this-"I don't really want a relationship right now"....all this in the same sentence-yeah, well, at least I found out; cried a little since my heart was ripped out...but then in about a week...I began to heal.....and it's another story from there(cuz one of his friends finally confessed his love to me lol.....:D...and I ended up engaged....but it didn't work out later on)...but someone else will come along..don't worry...I hope that that someone listens to you, and I don't think that that life will be this crazy...then again, crazy ends up good once in while...man, I always spill my guts out when I read stuff like this=btw, I luv your writing, as always...;)...and I agree with mystory-take that chance anyway asap!
*Meg*

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

This was sad.I liked this poem.We all think that.What if we open our hearts,and he/she refuse us,but what if he/she accept you.You will never know if you don't try.But its hard to make a first step.It is.And sometimes you gotta risk...Well,really great poem.
:)

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Wow my absolute fave line was "Stitches can't repair a broken heart" so so true...a broken heart is never fully repaired but it can eventually seem that way =D It's so hard to trust and let your feelings be known after you've been hurt so much! But you will eventually find a person worth all the trouble =D great job!

Posted: Oct 7, 2008

This is exactly how I feel in the "relationship" I'm in. So beautifully written. Nice job.

--Tally

Posted: Nov 5, 2008