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The Sweet Awakening

Poem By: ashen
Romance


Ive been asleep for so long.. Ive been walking in a dream.. (Yeah, this poem is pretty short =p) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 20, 2008    Reads: 71    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


I’m awakening from my long sleep,
 
And opening up my eyes to the world,
 
To you.
 
The stone around my soul is softening,
 
The ice around my heart is melting,
 
And it’s slowly starting to beat for you.
 
I finally can feel the warmth of your love.
 
I no longer am living alone in my dark, silent place.
 
I am living a life with you,
 
Because I have been awakened.
 
I can start repairing myself,
 
And caring for my wounds,
 
For I am no longer sitting dormant,
 
Waiting for something to save me,
 
Waiting for someone to wake me up.
 
You are helping me along,
 
Getting me used to feeling again,
 
To love,
 
And to pain.
 
You’re protecting me from the darkness.
 
I’m trying to ignore the lies,
 
The hate and deceit.
 
I feel so small in the world, now,
 
I’ve been away for so long it seems.
 
I was asleep for so long,

And walking in a dream.

Now I know the sadness,

And the suffering,

 I wasn’t living in reality.

 But now I have you by my side through this nightmare.

You are not afraid in my sweet awakening.


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Comments:

Fantastic poem. Very sweet and filled with hope. I like it a lot. ^^

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Yup ^^ I wanted something a little more happy this time. Thanks :D

that was good keep it up :D

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it =]

hi! ashen. ur poem shows u've found ur strength and come into ur own. and u've woken up to a real world where u've able support in the form of love. what more can u ask for. lucky girl. ;-)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, Thanks :D

I went through this last Christmas. And then had my heart broken for the first time.
Beautiful poem; I liked the length.

--Tally

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, this feeling bites.. Thanks :D



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