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What Can I Do...?

Poem By: ashen
Romance


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Submitted: Jul 24, 2008    Reads: 77    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


What can I do?
 
You make me love you.
 
Somehow, some way,
 
Every day I think about you.
 
No matter how hard I try,
 
I can’t forget you,
 
Or stop loving you.
 
Even though you might not care,
 
I want to be with you.
 
Sometimes I don’t think you know I’m there,
 
Looking to you for answers.
 
My love for you may not be returned,
 
But I can’t help it.
 
What can I do?
 
It seems as though I can’t do anything.
 
I can’t do anything to let you know how I feel.
 
I can’t do anything to stop myself before I fall again.
 
I can’t make you love me,
 
Because I want you to be happy.
 
But I wish you felt the same way.
 
Maybe there’s hope,
 
I just don’t know.
 
You can’t see me in the crowd,
 
Among the others.
 
To you I am just another face,
 
Just another person in your way.
 
But, what can I do?
 
I am just one person,
 
Nothing special.
 
But I wish that we could be together,
 
Even as friends.
 
Sometimes I’m sorry I love you,
 
Because I don’t want to give you this burden.
 
What can I do?


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jorja Rose
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i like it

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :D

Great poem!
I've been trying for weeks, maybe months to capture how i feel about this particular person, but it just hasn't worked. Your poem says it exactly, captures the right emotion.
I know it is hard when you feel like this, but really like you say 'what can i do?'

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow. Really? Thank you so much :D

It's amazing how many people will be able to relate to this. It's very nice, well done.

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :D I'm really glad you liked it =]

Yet another sweet and beautiful poem. I know just how this feels, and I'm going though something sort of like this now, so I can really feel a conection to it. Very, very nice. ^^

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? Wow. Thank you so much =] I'm glad you liked it =D

Yet another beautiful love poem. I wish I could pull something else out of you.
You are just one persone, but you are special as well.
I will say in your defense that this line was genius
"Sometimes I’m sorry I love you,"
It just says so much.

--Tally

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow. Thanks so much. :] I'm really glad you liked it. :D

Aww this is very touchy and beautiful.Sad tough.
But u made a beautiful poem.
:)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks ^^ I'm glad you liked it. =]



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