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Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 Reads: 77 Comments: 6 Likes: 2
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Posted: Jul 24, 2008
Great poem!
I've been trying for weeks, maybe months to capture how i feel about this particular person, but it just hasn't worked. Your poem says it exactly, captures the right emotion.
I know it is hard when you feel like this, but really like you say 'what can i do?'
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
It's amazing how many people will be able to relate to this. It's very nice, well done.
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
Yet another sweet and beautiful poem. I know just how this feels, and I'm going though something sort of like this now, so I can really feel a conection to it. Very, very nice. ^^
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
Yet another beautiful love poem. I wish I could pull something else out of you.
You are just one persone, but you are special as well.
I will say in your defense that this line was genius
"Sometimes I’m sorry I love you,"
It just says so much.
--Tally
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
Aww this is very touchy and beautiful.Sad tough.
But u made a beautiful poem.
:)
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
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