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Submitted: Jan 15, 2007 Reads: 101 Comments: 6 Likes: 2
You are beautiful
Just the way you are
You are perfect
Despite your imperfections
You are incredible
In every single way
You are unique
With no need to be jealous
Your smile is extravagant
It lights up someone's day
Your eyes sparkle like the stars
And never go unnoticed
Your body's curves are graceful
Regardless of your weight
Your face in perfect proportion
Every single day
You are amazing
A girl sent down from heaven
You are deserving
Of the handsome boy
Who is your other half.
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Lovely, Beautiful Simplicity. You indeed could have your own line of cards and/or plaques. You express sentiments that could/should be handed to the people that we truly care about. I've never found cards that say exactly what I want them to, ya know? (The name of the line should be:
Beautiful Simplicity....that would be perfect!)
Just a thought :)
Posted: Jan 15, 2007
Well constructed poem with a simple but touching message. There is a lot of truth in the lines here and it is the sign of a good poet/writer that you allow yourself to understate the sentiment. I enjoyed the read. Good poem. Scott.
Posted: Jan 15, 2007
Another emotional and well written poem
Posted: Jan 15, 2007
Beautiful Simplicity:
Nice, clean and spare verse with a truly uplifting message.
Great for lifting the spirits of a woman, who may need your poem to remind her.
Another terrific job.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Jan 16, 2007
Beautiful poem. It made me feel good just reading it.
Posted: Jun 8, 2008
great poem
beautifully written
the only thing i differed on was the line
"despite your imperfections"
i believe that it is our imperfections that makes us perfect
our body tells a story and with every story comes a beautiful outcome.
Posted: Sep 27, 2008
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