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I Want What I Can't Have

Poem By: Blisteredsouls
Romance


i wrote this becasue a really good friend of mine left View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 15, 2008    Reads: 139    Comments: 6    Likes: 0   


The feeling so wonderful,
There was a flight of butterflies,
I felt nothing like it before,
I wished I stay with it,
I wish I could only see it,
One more time
 
People tell me to move on,
Forget it,
But it won’t go,
I knew it would haunt me,
I always thought of it,
In my dreams,
In my mind,
Never gone
 
 
I only wish I told,
I wish it felt the same,
I wish it was here,
I want something I can not have,
I dreamt something impossible,
Never to see it again


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i don't know what so say to that...

Posted: Mar 15, 2008

Author Comment:

What do you mean???

i mean it left me speechless

Posted: Mar 15, 2008

this is really good, i really know the feeling!! Great poem! :)

Posted: Apr 13, 2008

Author Comment:

:) thanks

When you where writing this wer u on smack???lol just kididng.... its alright.... i don't get it though

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

well see i wrote it because i wanted to go out with this dude and he left so
ya
but thnx
keep reading

I can totally relate to this. I'm always wanting something that I can't have but when you know you can't have it, it makes you want it more. Brilliantly written.

Keep up the good work!

Olola.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, and if you liked that then read some more of my work



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