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Sky of Blue

Poem By: Blisteredsouls
Romance


Tags: love, sky

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Submitted: May 17, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


I sit under a sky of blue
All I can think of is me and you
I sit there gazing at the sky
Thinking of you as days go by
Wishing we can be together
Me and you always and forever
Hoping we will never part
You will always remain in my heart


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Awwww^_^-- I couldn't resist not looking at this poem. My favorite color is blue-- and as soon as I read the first line of this poem I couldn't resist not reading the rest (like I said I'm really busy right now) but it was really beautiful:)!

It was heart-warming. I could just picture this person sitting on a hill watching the sky turn light to dark-- as the days go by. Watching the sky because that's all the person has left to remember their loved one by.

I also pictured the person's eyes twinkling in the star light-- yep^_^! Lol, I have a really overly exaggerating imagination-- I will be back to read more of your work:).

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks
and dont worry imagination is what gets me through life.

Reminds me of that song "i see trees of green".. lol. I liked it!

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks ben long time since weve talked

I love it! not many people like to rthmy anymore!!!
WITH MUCH NOTHINGNESS,
KR (aka, The Silent Writer)

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading glad you enjoyed

awwwwwwww! skies always bring back memories!! come check out my poem "clear skies" its about the sky too!! oh and also the other poem I told you about!! gracias!!

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

ok thank you i will check it out sometime
oh and check out this account me and my friend write the poems together on it
Account: together we will make it

~katya



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