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Submitted: May 17, 2008 Reads: 36 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
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Awwww^_^-- I couldn't resist not looking at this poem. My favorite color is blue-- and as soon as I read the first line of this poem I couldn't resist not reading the rest (like I said I'm really busy right now) but it was really beautiful:)!
It was heart-warming. I could just picture this person sitting on a hill watching the sky turn light to dark-- as the days go by. Watching the sky because that's all the person has left to remember their loved one by.
I also pictured the person's eyes twinkling in the star light-- yep^_^! Lol, I have a really overly exaggerating imagination-- I will be back to read more of your work:).
Lot's of special chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: May 17, 2008
Reminds me of that song "i see trees of green".. lol. I liked it!
Posted: May 18, 2008
I love it! not many people like to rthmy anymore!!!
WITH MUCH NOTHINGNESS,
KR (aka, The Silent Writer)
Posted: May 20, 2008
awwwwwwww! skies always bring back memories!! come check out my poem "clear skies" its about the sky too!! oh and also the other poem I told you about!! gracias!!
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
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