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Submitted: Aug 4, 2008 Reads: 120 Comments: 9 Likes: 2
Have you ever thought about how beautiful you look,
In that pink sweater of yours,
you always know what to wear,
the newest trend,
and the oldest fashion.
Your heart is full of scars,
and yet you still look beautiful in the moon light,
I never thought you were a person,
You looked like an angel sent from god,
your blonde hair like the shiny golden sun,
your all perfect teeth shine as you smile,
Have you?
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aww, sumones got a girlfriend! hehe, great poem!
L ♥
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
AWWWW, it is really cute and you must have a girlfirend to have something this discriptive i love it though:]
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
Nice poem. And I agree eiter you have a girlfriend or you are stalking someone. Not sure which. Anyway great poem.
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
Lol,its really sweet poem.I like it.And its always a nice feeling when you're in love.
:)
Posted: Aug 5, 2008
That was good. I liked the line "Your heart is full of scars" good imagery. Keep it up! =)
Posted: Aug 5, 2008
hehe, someones got a girlfriend!!! lol, good job.
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
I loved it. I think this is an incredible poem.
Posted: Aug 9, 2008
Oooo...You can tell you've got a lover here :P I like it! A+!
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
love is always a grand thing to have, this girl i hope loves you too, and if she does, then nothing in this world well ever stop you from achieving great things, i know cause i have a special lady in my life, that i love more then all the world.
And if it wasn't for her, i would not even been writing a story or poems or anything on here. Just be true to your girlfriend and she will be true to you.
Posted: Oct 2, 2008
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