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If love is allowed to die, all that remains is loneliness. Don't ever let it go. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 14, 2008 Reads: 62 Comments: 7 Likes: 2
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Sad state loneliness
Posted: Apr 14, 2008
Wow! This poem deserves more comments. So beautifully and thoughtfully written though very sad. Title fits the poem very well.
Posted: Apr 15, 2008
oh wow, this was so beautiful!!! i thoroughly enjoyed it!! Great work!
Posted: Apr 17, 2008
Holy dancing marguaritas on fire! That was so deep, I love your style of writting, really puts a mental image in our heads, the descriptive language you have mastered indeed, I had to check out your work since you were a fan of DarkFairy and it is awesome, I will check out your novels as soon as I finish my own, they sound promising.
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
I have no words-really grat poem!!!! keep writing! ;-)
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
your discriptions are enthralling. i love your work.
Lydia_xxxx
Posted: May 4, 2008
Thats a really amazing poem ;
I love the way you have with words ,
this makes you think about it (:
i love it (:
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
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