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Love is...Everything

Poem By: BrokenSilences
Romance


My description of love..."When u have love, u should treasure it...Think of it every day, think of the future, past, everything." All that. Been a huge work-in-progress...Glad to say it's finished! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 9, 2008    Reads: 101    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


The everlasting feeling of love at first sight

Has the amazing power of an eagle taking flight

And long-lasting love between two souls

Is to promise forever "One hand to hold"

And when that day comes when we take our vows

Mine will reflect yours the way the sea reflects the clouds

And in our separate voices, we will say together

Those special words that say our love's forever:

"I promise you're the air I breathe, the reason for all I do

And most of all, I promise, that I will always, always love you

And anything I said that ever brought you tears

I want to take away from you with every single year

I will love you everyday and hold onto you forever

Because I promise I would never let go of you, my treasure..."

But since we're far apart and our love has just begun

We still need something that we know is Our Song to be sung

It will be of how I met him and how our love will stay

How when I know our love is real, I'll think of him everyday

And our love is something he and I hold close

A treasure in in the world that will never let us go

His protective being took me right from the start

The only one, anywhere, to truly have my heart

The voice of my angel is an intoxicating lullaby

The only one I need to hear say to me, "Goodnight"

And his is the scent of fall wind in trees

Like the feeling of forever in the warm summer breeze

We are perfect for each other in every single way

The impossibility a knot is tied without a single fray

My world now has colors I've never seen before

With sounds such as ocean waves caressing silent shores

Love has the beauty of the sunset and the sea

Of breath-taking meadows of gold and of green

All light could fade away and our love could disappear

But neither would matter as long as he's here

Because nothing else matters to me when he's around

He is the second half of me that I have finally found...


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Comments:

Such presious words of love and commitment.......great write....Juliet

Posted: Feb 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u

i think you express love better then most people do these days and i think you have a way with words that can only be expressed by one who knows how love feels

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks that means a lot coming from u...i've been lucky enough to read ur poems, theyre amazing khrane...=)



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