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She Smiled At Me

Poem By: Brown Skin
Romance


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Submitted: Jan 8, 2008    Reads: 100    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


I praise the day she turned my way

....and smiled at me

That star filled sky of a smile

I struggled to say hello

She opened her mouth and her voice was like poetry

Her words wrapped themselves around me

She graced the floor with every step she made

Her music is what my heart played

Light as a feather I felt

Gazing at this magnificent creation

I began to melt

My thoughts I remembered no more

Time stopped as I sat in amazement

She had placed a spell on me

And all it took was for her

.....to smile at me


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Comments:

What a beautiful poem, it means a lot to me and I wish others had felt that way about me. Your work is perfect, keep it up.

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much and I'm glad that my words had a positive affect on you! I'm sure you're a very beautiful person!

This is such a lovely poem. it's soo good I actually can't describe how goood it is...Keep it up!!! :B

Posted: Jan 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol Thank you very much! I;m glad you liked it!

Very nice... It's amazing what a smile can do to both giver and receiver. Happy writing...Jerry

Posted: Jan 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol I know! Thanks for your comment!

HAHAHAHA; that is so good!!! :) I know that feling; and honestly how could one ever forget? I enjoyed this one alot! katie

Posted: Jan 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! Thanks for your comment!



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