Submitted: Mar 31, 2008
Reads: 92
Comments: 13
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See we're like peanut butter and jelly
We're a classic
A perfect match
The love we'll share will complement us like a glass of milk
See you're like a bird to my morning
You are my morning song
I just wanna vibe in your melody
Harmonize with you as I sing along
See we're like a Carmelo candy bar
You're caramel brings out the flavor in me
You are the excitement inside of me
The sweetness inside of me
You are like the breeze in the middle of summer
You rejuvinate me
You ease the stress
And relax me
You're like the sun in my sky
You're my brightest star
You shine brightly above the rest
And in you I fell blessed
See you're like the strings to my guitar
There's no music without you
Like the pusher while I swing
I can't get higher without you
Its you who I dreamed of all these years
And if its God's will
I pray that it is
We will be destiny fulfilled~
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Comments:
very nice. have missed your excellent poetry. this made me mellow..
glad to see you back writing.
take care
snow x
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
A lot of ungerstanding - GODS WILL
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
Awwww
That is the sweetest!!! My fave line is, 'You're like the strings to my guitar, there's no music without you' I love this!! I'm sure there's a lucky lady behind all those beautiful words.
MA
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
ooh i really like this
its cute and sweet without being too cliche which is really good
=]
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
Irwin
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Good ballad style - easy to sing along to, and well chosen words conveying the sentiments without being too sentimental. I like it.
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
Very nice! I loved the peanut butter and jelly. Very original and very cool. Awesome job!
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
I don't have a lot of time to write a comment, but it's nice and sweet and honest. I really like it ^_^
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
Yes, lovely sweet lve poem with some good thoughts and memorable lines.
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
love spelt love not lve - sorry!
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
Lionheart
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Anna was right, memorable lines :)
It was very creative and it came out really well. The first line had me laughing hHAHhaHAhAhAhAH!!!!
Very nicely done and VERY original :D
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
I hope some day, if it hasn't been done already, that your words will be set to music...
JoKa
Evelyn
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
Great combinations!!
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
this is really beautiful, and I honestly could hear it as being a song...I don't know, that just me...sometimes I read poetry and it just sounds like music...really enjoyed your words used in this piece, sincerely *meg*RG
Posted: Nov 9, 2008
