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I've had this outrageous crush on a guy at my school, and this is about him. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 4, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Who am I supposed to be?

You treat me like I'm not even there,

so how am I supposed to impress you?

I want you for my own,

but I don't know what to do.

You drive me insane over myself,

because you're with another girl.

I so badly want to be her,

but she is better than me,

different than me,

a whole different person.

Who am I supposed to be around you?

Smart? Funny? Silly? Quiet? Outspoken?

I don't know how to act.

I don't know how to feel.

I see you,

and you see right through me.

Is that how love is suposed to be?


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That was great.I could easily relate to it.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I didn't really know what I was writing, it just kinda came out. I get so mad at him. It really bugs me. I'm not even sure why. I wish people couldn't realate that well. It lets me know that there are other heart-broken girls out there. I will most likely never get to be with him, but I might as well try! Good luck to you in the same aspect.

I to can relate (alas!) You have written well the turmoil of emotion created when you really like someone who doesn't appear to "see you".

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I don't really write poems much, but I guess I'm pretty good at getting my point accross. Thank you for reading! :D

who is the guy??? i like it

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

e squared



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