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The New Romantics

Poem By: Camisado92
Romance


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Submitted: May 15, 2007    Reads: 82    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


I love you honey,

Why can’t you see?

How much I love you?

You belong to me.

�

Sweetie, you’re my everything.

My soul and my heart.

I cannot believe I got you

When cupid shot his dart.

�

You tell me time and time again,

I am your only one.

But this is the last time you tell me,

Because we are done.

�

You tell me one more night,

Yeah, sure, one more time,

I don’t believe a word.

This isn’t worth a dime.

�

Your black heart won’t save you

From the despair of mine,

Please stop telling me lies,

You won’t take up all my time.

�

I see right through you,

And as you stand there,

Practising your lines in the mirror.

This is the end of our affair.

�

I stand as your reflection,

I see you from the inside out,

Your stand there, innocent,

Laced with doubt.

�

But I do love you.

Believe me, I still do.

But with every breath I take,

Just know, I could destroy you......


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Comments:

damnnn

awesomeeee

it actually was all true

nd it kinda hurt

but the truth hurts=)

more=)

Posted: May 22, 2007

Author Comment:

lol

Thank you! I know it's the truth. :d But I had to say it now matter how much it hurts;)

Nanny
(not registered user)

Quirky funny and true. The fact that a person has the ability to love or destroy another is a powerful thing. loved it.

Posted: Jan 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Well thank you very much 'Nany'. Your comment is very much appreciated. Thanks for reading!

Ain't love just like that? And on a daily basis. It can bring out the very best and the very worst in us and that's what makes it so damned addictive - it makes us feel alive. Great poem! Loved it!

Posted: Jan 17, 2008

Author Comment:

YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!! Ya, I didn't write this about like an ex boyfriend or something. I accutaly wrote it about Pete Wentz who I was crazy on love with. But then he got engaged to Ashlee Simpson. That's when I wrote this. I am so glad you loved this. This is my favourite poem I've ever written. Danke!!!!!!

MUM
(not registered user)

I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU GOT YOUR TALENT TO WRITE AND MAKE ME SEE WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO SAY(I WISH IT WAS FROM ME) YOU ARE TRULY GIFTED AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. KEEP WRITING TO LEAVE YOUR AMAZING GIFTS TO THE REST OF THE WORLD.

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL WORDS, MUMMY.

I WILL KEEP WRITING. I ENJOY IT. THANK YOU FOR READING THESE.



P.S. LOWER CASE LETTERS ARE OVERRATED :p

MUCH LOVE!!!!

wow is all i can say.

Posted: Feb 28, 2008

Author Comment:

:D Im glad you liked it.

I will be updating BIF soon i promise!!!

this is soo good!!! you're amazing!

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

aweeee your amazing!!



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