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Passionate storms blow in
upon the moon lit beach
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Submitted: Nov 7, 2007 Reads: 78 Comments: 3 Likes: 5
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This is very nice. I've seen moonlit beaches and they are very seductive for sure.
Posted: Nov 7, 2007
the way you word this along with the picture brings it to life. Very, Very nice Cara :) *****
Posted: Nov 7, 2007
Vivid imagery... excellent choice of words proving it isn't the length of a piece that makes it unforgettable. Very nice... Thanks for sharing........Jerry
Posted: Nov 9, 2007
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