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first love! :D

Poetry By: Cocoa
Romance


okay, even tho i say it's "poetry" !! i have to admit.. i sang this! it's a song.. but oh well... enjoy it either way and please ANY tips or criticism would be wonderfull


Submitted:Jun 11, 2012    Reads: 6    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


FIRST LOVE!

People say love hurts... 
but i don't really care
cause when i'm with you 
it's like ... cinderella over again... 
cause, when i can't see you.. all the worls a prison
it's dark and lonely and the day never begins
the night drags on and the stars never shine
everything i work for is never fine..!!!
And it's like,
I try to think but i'm going insane 
I wake up and nothing's ever same
what's this feeling... what's this song..!??
the reason that I'm dancing along??
 
and then you come from nowhere....
and the world starts making sense again..!!
but, i try to speak but my minds in a blur,
my hand's robotic n my smile so firm...
and then you smile at so perfectly, 
gracefully,
hopefully,
probably me.




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