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ANT'S CHALLENGE-->Missing you

Poem By: Dark Skylight
Romance


Tags: missing

I had to write a song.For Ant's challenge.
I tried,lol.I wrote it like 6 days ago,lol,but I couldnt publish it,coz Ive been in dorm as u all probably know,lol.
:)
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Submitted: Sep 20, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   


Missing every litle thing about you.

Missing every litle tear I cried for you.

Every single smile you put on my face.

Im missing you.

You!You!

Always,forever,somewhere.

From the light or the darkness,

you come out and save me.

You come out and pull me up.

To the sky.

With your heart to bring me back to life.

Missing every litle thing about you.

Missing every litle tear I cried for you.

Every single smile you put on my face.

Im missing you.

You!You!

Sometimes my mind is just trapped in here.

And I can't get out.

Because you used to save me.

You used to love me.

You.You.You.

You.You.You.

Black clouds were up,

small rain had fall.

Your face was in in

Inside my heart.

I still can't forget you.

Can't even leave you.

I think I still love you.

Even tough you break my heart.

Crying so soft,and slow in the dark

I hide my tears.

But I can't.

Im missing you.

Like a fire.

Im missing you.

Like the air that burns inside my lungs.

Like the words that you used to say.

You,And nobody else.

And every single stop sign I see when I think of you

in in Inside my mind.

Im missing you.

Missing you.Missing you.

With my last breathe I whisper.



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Comments:

The love is really everywhere around. Great work.

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,yea...Thanks for reading and commenting.
:)

yaaaaa lovely poemsong lol XD i looove the last line =]
t'would make a great song :D:D
take care ^^

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Hahah,thank soo much!! Im glad you liked it.
Thanks again.For reading and commenting.
:)

Wow....that was amazing. =) It really would make a great song. :]

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!!!I happy coz of that.
:)

auwwww that is really cute...and well suited with the music...nice job!

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww,thankkkkkksssss soo much!Im really glad you liked it.
:)

lovely...simply simple and intense...well done

Posted: Sep 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww,thanks!
:)

i simply luv it! i luv the song as well and i have to admit this poem was well- written. anyway, u really are talented, so keep it up!

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks soo much.It means a lot to me.Thank you!!
:)



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