Sometimes I think...
Just on you.
On us.
How much I love you.
But do you know?Maybe.
You love me,say Im everything to you.
And than you leave.
You come back not so soon,
and with few words say everything,
and I just fall on them and your voice.
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I CANT RESIST TO YOU
Poem By: Dark Skylight
Romance
Submitted: Sep 28, 2008 Reads: 38 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
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I like the lucidity of this fine poem. Love well expressed. Did you mean "then" instead of "than"? Enjoyed.
Posted: Sep 28, 2008
Wish I had the same feeling. I loved that writing. That was worth sharing, and meaningful.
Posted: Sep 28, 2008
Good poem, but not the kind of feeling I like... Nice work tough. :D
Posted: Oct 3, 2008
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