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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 82    Comments: 9    Likes: 5   


Night is young.

Moon is bright.

Stars are shine.

Night is perfect.

For you and me

to be together.

Night is perfect,

just for us.

Moon is bright,I see your face.

Stars are shine,I feel your love.

Night is young like we are now.

Perfect moonlight

Shining in the dark.

And illuminating

our love.

PERFECT LOVE.


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Comments:

Perfect love indeed. Don't we all just always wish for those moments? Love it.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Yea,we all wish for those moments,i think...I know that I wish...Thanks. :)

When one feels love as perfect as that, everything around seems perfect too. ^^

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes,I agree.Thank you for commenting. :)

very good.....love is perfect.....wow......

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

lol,thanks! :)

OOOOOHHHHHHH, somebody got a Boyfriend!!! Then again, u said it in ur profile. Lookz like hez gonna be a keeper. (LAL)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha,yes.And I love him really.Thanks for that sweet comment. :)

this was so beautiful.........and sweet!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww,thank you! :)

aww sweet young love I know it so well lol well i was there a few years ago still am really.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,yea.
Thank you for comment! :)

AMEN....MAY U STAY HAPPY LIKE THIS ALWAYS....

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

lol,thanks.I hope I will,because I really love him.And thank you again. :)

such a sweeeet poem it is!!^_^

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,thanks a lot for reading it.

:)

aww, that's so cute. ♥

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol,thanks.
:)



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