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night,
perfect,
love,
mind,
heart,
closed,
blocked,
opened,
turned,
rain,
kiss,
step,
frozen,
eyes,
face,
sky,
red,
moon,
white,
body
...Always.
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Submitted: Sep 6, 2008
Reads: 61
Comments: 8
Likes: 2
Final fantasy
Mind is blocked.
Heart is closed.
For everyone.
Eyes are glowing.
Every second.
My hearts beating.
Fast.
Breathing is faster.
You are here.
Someone who's always
with me.
Im frozen.
My body's still.
Time stopped.
You are here.
Sky turned red.
Moon went white.
You and me.
Looking each other.
Rain's falling.
Tear's dropping.
Love between us
is strong.
I cant break the wall.
My heart opened.
Mind's working.
Eyes are seeing your face.
One step straight,
and wall is dead.
One kiss more,
and rain's gone.
Night's perfect.
We're together.
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Comments:
Cute. Seriously, cute.
Great poem
Posted: Sep 6, 2008
i second Alek on this...I was happy to read this one...loved it esp after that gloomy poem of urs which left me worried...
keep going and trust friends...but not that much that they get the right to hurt you...no one should hurt ur soul...
STAND OUT...
Posted: Sep 6, 2008
__ aww, that poem was so sweet!! loved it! greta work :)
Posted: Sep 6, 2008
i love it...well i could be a bit bias cuz i love Final Fantasy...but still...lolz..good work!
Posted: Sep 7, 2008
i saw this earlier and wanted to comment, but i kicked off line....
anywho, love the work done here!! very well done!!
Posted: Sep 8, 2008
hah its cool ^^ in the background [apart from the music you put, which btw i love that song!!!] i could hear those hopeful drums. i like the way it ended "night is perfect, we're together" i also like the shortness of the verses :D makes it more unique ^^
great work =]
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
loved it i am a big fan of final fantasy and i also love everything that you write keep up the good work
Posted: Sep 14, 2008
a fitting end to a final fantasy , lovely poem .
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
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