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The Tempter

Poem By: elegantbleeding
Romance


A very short poem about strong desire. It's not really explicit, just suggestive. Hopefully that will add to the poem rather than detract from it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 28, 2007    Reads: 57    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


 

I guess its impulse that drives me.
To do these things that I know we.
Shouldn’t do
But it’s so hard to resist,
This has to be the strongest temptation
Living on your lips.
I know that we must be crazy.
But why leave earth in a perfect body?
Your perfect body
And an angel’s face are,
Erasing everything...  Erasing everything…


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Comments:

short but sweet! nice style of writing. i enjoyed it

Posted: Feb 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you, emmauck.



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