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Love from Lust

Poem By: Ella Deschanel
Romance


Lyrics for a song called "This Love." View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 21, 2008    Reads: 85    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


The sun met the sea
My eyes brought you to me
Sights of desire
Hearts on fire
Stares of such lust
Intuition like angel dust

We brought us here
Where love once appeared
Our lustful temptations
Turned my only salvation
Our intense relish
Changed passion to be embellished

This love, awake for far too long
Put to rest, with no song
This love, dead after so much living
Gone, no forgiving
This love we began to betray
We let it soar away

We knew it wasn't meant to last
When we let go of lessons past
The need for excite hit its height
What we shared at first
Became a love doomed and cursed

This love, awake for far too long
Put to rest, with no song
This love, dead after so much living
Gone, no forgiving
This love we began to betray
We let it soar away

This love, awake for far too long
Put to rest, with no song
This love, dead after so much living
Gone, no forgiving
This love we began to betray
We let it soar away

Oooh oh oooh, oooh oooh oh
Oooh ooh ooh oooh ooh oh

I know now that slow is better
You made me blind to write a love letter
This wound must mend
Or ill have no start from this end


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Comments:

wow, i this poem is so good...also love the picture that goes with it...keep it up! :B LC

Posted: Jan 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

That is so good. I have recently seperated from my abusive husband and I had a hard time letting go. I have come to realize we often hold on to long to something we should let go. I found that it seemed easier to get let down and hurt by the same man because you expect it after so many times. You know he will hurt you and break your heart so you are not as dissappointed and heart broken each time he does it. You expected it so it is a little easier to take. Still hurts but not as much after so many times. It is harder to put your love, trust, and faith in someone new only to get heart broken again so you stay and only end up more destroyed then if you would have walked away a long time ago. You loose yourself and everything you hoped and dreamed of is lost. I have finally gained some of myself back and rebuilding my hopes and dreams after five years of pain. Thank you this really hit home for me.

Posted: Feb 5, 2008



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