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A Talk With Jealousy

Poem By: Erin
Romance


Tags: jelousy, friends, guys

I wrote this when I saw how easily I get jealous. I also wrote this as a reminder for me, because many times the guy your dating won't be there forever. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 15, 2007    Reads: 99    Comments: 10    Likes: 1   


When I see you with her,

I get a green monster on my back,

And the jealousy says,

He never treated you like that,

 

She's my friend I say,

I’m happy for her,

And the jealousy replies,

But you still want things as they once were,

 

That is true,

But I can’t go back in time,

And there’s certainly no way,

That I can change his mind,

 

You’re just scared,

That again he’ll break your heart,

But it won’t matter,

Because you’re already torn apart,

 

So what if I am,

I want my friends to be glad,

And the jealousy asks,

But won’t you be mad,

 

My answer is yes,

But you need to go away,

Because no matter how much I love him,

Friends come before guys any day.


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Comments:

this is good and so true. maybe sort out the formatting?

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. As for the formatting my cmputer won't let me upload from word, and when I type it, it goes into that so...my computer's in a pickle.

Love Always,
Erin

I liked it. Everyone gets jealous. Formatting? At least it's readable, that's really all that counts, right? Anyways, awesome poem.

:]

-SnowQueen

Posted: Jun 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Love Always,
Erin

I really liked that, I think a lot of teenage girls in particular could do with remembering that once in a while xxx

Posted: Jun 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Lol. Oh how true that is...Thanks.

Love Always,
Erin


(not registered user)

wow, another one I can realte to. I love your ending line.... its powerful.

Posted: Jul 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. I had this happen to me not to long ago. But I relized guys aren't worth friendships.

Love ALways,
Erin

Judging the content: Good poem with a fine theme.

Posted: Aug 22, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you, Terry.

Love Always,
Erin

I like this poem cuz there aren't many good poems out there about jealousy.

Posted: Aug 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Oh, why thank you, Wings17.

Love Always,
Erin


(not registered user)

hmmm, i think everyone has a little monster in them, i personally know a friend who gets easily jealous with boys. But shes working on it and so are you!
my little monster is probably that feeling of worthlessness (and on a completely different topic your formatting makes me laugh, as well as the countless times you have had to explain it to people :P)

Posted: Aug 29, 2007

Author Comment:

OMG...LOL...yes I really hate it that I can't format it right on here, but thank you for your comments as always they make me smile.

Love Always,
Erin

love love love love LOVE it yer amazing

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you again.

Love Always,
Erin

This is a good work thank you for sharing, jealousy is one of our most horrible emotions. I suffered from this for many years, almost 9 actually with my longterm girlfriend/hot lover, but I am settled into being with her now and I trust/ thrust her deeply. Please check out my ssttuuffss.

Posted: Feb 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I will. Luckily I wrote this before it got too out of hand with me.

Love Always,
Erin

I like the theme. And many teenagers can relate to this one.And the ending is awesome!XD

Take care always^_^

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much Nuttyz.

Love Always,
Erin



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