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The Fallen Passion

Poem By: Four
Romance


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Submitted: Jul 15, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


The Fallen Passion

Green...All Ive ever seen
The eyes of which could make your heart explode
Just a glimpse and your stuck in another world

As if a fallen angel
Come to my rescue
I ask if you be mine, wont you?

I lay in a field of roses
Dazed by such beauty
I dare complain my life still shitty

Legs of a goddess
Could anyone ask for such greatness?
But I let you fall into distress

Sorry's not enough for my wrongs
You deserve not such a unworthy tool
I dare say I be the biggest fool

You walk away with that scent
That sweet, gorgeous scent...
I still pray we were meant...

But I have Fallen...
And if I'm not, then I'm crawlin...
We are: "The Fallen Passion"


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Comments:

Wow, what an incredibly beautiful write with such a sad twist. The imagery is excellent and the last stanza is perfect, well done.

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Breann
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Thanks Eric, your the best...and that was very very good

Posted: Jul 26, 2008



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