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Flutter

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Romance


A love poem I wrote for someone. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 10, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 10    Likes: 8   


Ice cold water flows over my broken heart

killing the warmth that's left

Creeping into the corners

making me hard and cold

My heart refuses to let anyone in

it can't take anymore beatings

No more excited rhythms

Just pumping to keep on living for nothing

Then one unexpected day, you arived

I forgot how it felt to live again

To feel my blood racing through my veins

Breathing life into my dead body

One look from you and my heart begins to thaw

Slowly starting to beat a different rhythm

My body reacting like never before

Speaking a foreign language just for you

My heart has melted, beating for you

My life, I give completely to you

Everytime your'e near, your lips against mine

My heart goes flutter,

flutter

flutter

flutter

flutter 

flutter

Just for you 


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Comments:

awwww that was so cute! It was so serious and beautiful and then it went to cute with the flutters. =) loved it. =) Mandy

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Mandy. I'm glad you liked it.

amazing! you have a gift for writing. my hands are actually shaking! AMAZING!

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Wandiola..I can't help it..I'm in love ;)

hi! lien. all the lovers will identify with ur poem. what u've written is universal. and u'll be loved for "the world loves a lover." ;-)

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

haHa thank you for the great comment Bubbly.

Deep, so deep...

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you indiefreak

My heart has melted, beating for you

My life, I give completely to you

Everytime your'e near, your lips against mine

My heart goes flutter,

flutter

divine poem buddy....every cell of my body loved this one

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thank you Pratibha

hahaha it made me smile at the end.. it's such a sweet little poem.. i like it =)

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you tin2twinkling!!!!!

oh wow, this is really good! Such an amazing person! it's so sweet, and i love the formating you did on this! love it!

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

aww thank you Seesawmae. This is a very special poem to me. Thanx again.

Thats what a real man does for his girl. And it should never end.

Beautiful, sweet romantic poem. It felt airy :)

Nice Lien, sorry for taking so long to get around to you, you know that is never my intention to leave people hanging.

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

No its cool. I know ur busy mr Big Boots. AHAHAHAHAHa.

yea, i love it!!!

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

I love it. I tingled all over as I read it. :)

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

aww thank you. I love your pen name



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