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The Poem You'll Never Read

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Romance


Tags: funnybunny, love, guy

A poem I wrote for a guy but he never read it and probably never will. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 22, 2008    Reads: 75    Comments: 6    Likes: 4   


I haven’t felt like this

In a long time

 

I haven’t needed someone so bad

The way I need you now

 

I haven’t allowed anyone in

I’m prepared to do it for you

 

The Butterflies in my stomach

Won’t stop, even when you’re gone

 

Your laugh will stay with me forever

Burning into my heart

 

Your touch, I will always remember

The way you made me feel

 

The want in your eyes

Makes my insides melt

 

I want to feel your arms around me

Your face in my neck, your hands in my hair

 

My desire for you consumes me

Even though I know it’s wrong

 

I hope you understand

You will always have my heart

 

And I hope that you’ll never forget me

You’ll always think of me

 

My thoughts are filled with you

Every second, every day

 

I feel alive with you

More than ever before

 

I want you to be happy

To enjoy your life

 

I’ll be waiting for the right time

To make you mine

 

I think I’ve fallen in love with you

Head over Heels

 

And I realize with each passing moment

I’ll never feel like this again

 

♥♥♥♥♥


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Comments:

wow what a awsome poem

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

Very sweet. I have never thought about a girl writing something for a guy... it seems they all want it written to THEM HahhaHahahA!!!!

I wonder now... would i ever recieve one??? Look what you've done!!! You gave me false hope T_T

Whatever... apparently i have an expert opinion... me... a guy who doesnt believe in cell phones...
I had butterflys in my stomach reading this, very nice Lien ^^
It felt airy...

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha Thank you Lionheart. You dont believe in cellphones???? I love writing so I'll write for anyone. I wrote you one didn't I????? Did you forget.

Beautiful!

Posted: May 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx Ezzy

I love this one.

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

It was beautifully written and kind of made me sad. There's a guy i've fallen totally in love with and he'll never know so this hit me pretty hard. ^-^

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Canine. I'm sorry to hear about your situation. Its very sad. Good luck to you.

I know this feeling, as well. It is such a beautiful poem, and I hope that everything will work out between you and the one you wrote this for. I know what it's like to be in you position, believe me. Wonderful job. Keep up that great work! :D

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Mystory. You are too kind for words.



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