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THE XXEMOXBFSXX CHALLENGE - Breath

Poem By: FunnyBunny
Romance


The xxemoxbfsxx challenge - yet another love poem...oh the extent of my mind... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Autumn leaves fall from the sky

Swinging

swinging

gently by

 

Your touch, it heals

I cannot resist

Your hope in me

Is my benefit

 

Your eyes as bright as the sun

Burn through my skin

 

My mind is crazed

My thoughts are blurred

My soul amazed

By the emotions that you stir

 

Your magical voice

Flows over me

As gentle

Gentle

As the sea

 

As you glance on my naked body

My skin responds to you

I float

Float

Into you

 

It’s you I don’t deserve

I keep telling you

 

But you don’t care

As long as I’m here

I’ll forever be your love

Your heart

Your soul

Your bunny

Your treat

 

And for the rest of time

You’ll always be mine

 

Two hearts together

Beating

Beating

As one

 

 

 

 

 


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Comments:

Awwww. I love how you slipped bunny in there! It made me grin so lovingly! Yes, I did!

Yay Lien!
You softy...I love it! This just flows and I feel like a harp was gently being caressed to finish filling my senses.
Aw.

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Why thank you cow. She gave me the word bunny, I almost died laughing...I am a softy oh yes I am. Glad you enjoyed it. I'm still waiting for my poem for my challenge.....moo

that's so cute, one of the reasons i couldn't wait 4 yours is the fact that i gave you the word bunny. lol. great job.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Lydia. yeah I kinda laughed when I saw the word bunny

You did a great job, funnybunny. It was so sweet.

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

why thank you susan

hi! lien. this reminds me of ur earlier poem "flutter". keep going. ;-)

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Bubbly. Glad you enjoyed it



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