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Submitted: Jul 27, 2007 Reads: 70 Comments: 5 Likes: 0
You are my light that shines thru the window,
My key that opens the lock.
My pen that writes the stories,
The hands that turn the clock.
You are my winds that move the sea breeze,
The sun that makes me hot.
You are my night that cools down everything,
You are the moon that makes my heart stop.
You are the rain that makes the frogs sing,
The hail that makes my ears ring.
Baby you are my everything,And everything's a lot.
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Nice one X
Posted: Jul 31, 2007
Short and sweet , and does not need many descriptions-the metaphors were enough to replace the descriptions !
Posted: Jul 31, 2007
Beautiful and complete. I love it.
Posted: Aug 3, 2007
wonderful short and to the point
peace
Boneman
Posted: Oct 14, 2007
beautiful, it had me reading over and over the line "You are the moon that makes my heart stop", almost to the point where i would cry. What a beautiful metaphor, when looking at the moon, your heart truly does stop for a second, and you forget where you are, and what you are. Stunning!!! i could go on for the 1000 words but im sure people on this site are sick of my extremely large comments.
Posted: Oct 19, 2007
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