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Just Yesterday

Poem By: Hugs and kisses
Romance


This is a poem, not only that but my first love/romance-ish one. And to the question that all my friends/people who know me will be asking. NO I will not tell you who this is about and YES it is actually a poem about how I feel, not how I imagine something will feel. Oh, and PLEASE give me a better name for this thing View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 21, 2008    Reads: 110    Comments: 17    Likes: 9   


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Until today, I’d never expect,

To write a single line about you,

All I gave you was plain respect,

Ok, maybe a little more, it’s true,

But all you were was a nice friend to keep,

Who’d have thought I’d think,

About you every night before I sleep?

I can’t even wrap my head around this,

My hands are shaking as I write this,

My heart is beating,

I have this shaky feeling,

It’s hard to type another word.

Just yesterday, my explanation

Would have been it’s simply cold,

But now I’ve had this revelation,

If the honest truth be told,

That this entire poem,

Is about you.


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Comments:

Your writing is awesome, my friend^-^! Getting better and better all the time. Anyway... a suggestion for the title... hmmmm... How about:

Just yesterday--

or:

Not a single line...

How about that?

This is really good, Hugs and Kisses-- I'm clicking on the like it button!!!!!

Lot's of chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 21, 2008

Author Comment:

I like "Just Yesterday" I'll think about it though.

Great poem well written and i love the ryhmes =)

--Hoodling--

Posted: Mar 21, 2008

woah! i love it! its kinda sweet in a way *wipes away tear* YAY! keep on writing =D

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I think this is my favorite poem I've written (tied with Devil with No Disguise) So I was pretty proud of it, I'm really glad other people like it too!

Hugs and Kisses

It's nice. I like the idea. April Writer

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks ^_^ I'm glad people are liking it

i like the flow, it's really cute. I love it:) Feel free to check out come of my poetry and short stories, i think you'll like them.
Steph:)

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'll totally check your stuff ^_^

Lionheart
(not registered user)

Very cute. I know that feeling where you try to write about someone and your hand is kind of jittery. I love the way you started it: "Until today". You have talent! Hope you keep writing and inviting me. I pushed the i like it button.

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Oooh! I love the "I like it" button! It's so awesome! But yes, thank you for looking at the poem and I'm happy you liked it ^_^

I know what its like when you write about somebody like that:)This poem was really really good, you have such great talent. The rhyme scheme was fabulous, and just what you say really comes together. Let me think..."Just for you"?
LOVED IT:)

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Hmmm....actually I think I might keep it as Just Yesterday. But Just for you actually gave me an idea for another poem...gotta go before it goes out of my head ^_^

So sweet, I almost cried!

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

You almost cried! Aww man, now I feel bad, I'm making people cry :( but at least you liked it! (I think, you liked it, right?) and thank you for commenting, and thank you for being my fan!

awww. very cute
i loved it lot''s
kayla:)

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked it ^.^

I really liked it. the last two lines especially.
~Muffins~

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I have to go check what the last two lines are. Thank you, again, for commenting, I love comments and it makes me feel all happy inside when people comment ^_^

Awe, I really liked the imagery and the honesty of it! Who hasn't felt that way about someone? *gushes*

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, thank you for the comment, I love comments! Comments rule! Yeah, I agree everyone feels something like the poem describes at least once in their life, which is sort of why I decided to post it, at first I didn't want to because it was so personal, but I finally decided that I should, and people so far have liked it! So I'm glad I actually did post it!

That was very heartfelt and sweet. I liked it ^_^

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! You like my poems! This is good, because your a good writer so if you like my stuff it has to mean something, right? Anyway, thanks for commenting!!!

When I read this poem it took me back, back to a place and time when all I could think about was a man I had loved with my heart and soul. When it was over, I seen him, heard him, wrote about him, and thought about him day and night. Thank Goodness it ended.

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm happy that my poem brought back those memories, even if they might not have been the happiest times of your life. I guess it's nice that to see people can relate to my poetry to their own life. Thank you so much for commenting!

I would say I know what you're talking about, but I would be lying. Awesome job...I clicked the button :P

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! you clicked the button! HA you don't know mwahahahahahaha!!!! Sorry...weird mood. Thank you so much for commenting!!

Oh I felt this is my story sweety....i married that man and though we fight lots, we cannot stay apart...lol
such a lovely poem

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Awwww thank you! Also, thank you for commenting on ALL my work and leaving such lovely comments as well. Oh yeah, and thank you for taking the time to put in little stories and such in your comments. Wow, that's a lot of thank yous, I guess I'm just preparing for my graduation speech :P

Awww
I know the feeling :]

I really like the free verse broken up rhythm of this. It's almost not like poetry, but because of the stanzas and language it is.
But the scattered rhythm gives it a mixed feel, not unlike that scattered feeling you get when you feel this way about someone.

Good job :]

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked it! This is one of those poems that you realy, really write about your own feelings and things like that, so I'm really happy you see that in it ^.^

This is a great poem.. You can so feel your emotions in this.. You are an extremely talented person..

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

awwwww thank you! I'm glad that you liked it so much, I'm flattered ^.^



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