Random First Lines: You make me feelLike you’re the only one,You make me feel,Empty. And when we’re fucked in the... : Other » Read

Welcome Visitor: Login to the siteJoin the site

That Perfect Someone (My Perfect Someone)

Poem By: Hugs and kisses
Romance


Fifth in a series of poems called "That Perfect Someone" all the poems are of (fictional) guys. They all are me trying to write poems about some of my friends perfect someone...some I just sort of guessed though. Oh! And try to guess which one is my perfect guy! (It won't be what you think) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 18, 2008    Reads: 74    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Creamy white skin and jet black hair,

Red streaked bangs and an intense stare,

A kind heart that’s good and a sweet touch,

That loves you almost, almost too much,

 

He’s smart, quiet and he writes poetry,

About his hopes, his dreams, what he wants to see,

He’s a gentleman, he’s observant,

He listens patiently to every single rant,

And he know exactly what he has to say,

When to be close, when to stay far away,

 

My perfect somebody, my perfect guy,

You I can never ever deny,

Someday, someday soon, you I will find.


2

Email this story Email this story | Print Story Print Story | Add to reading list

Comments:

aww! i liked this one the best so far. XD
he sounds like the perfect guy in my opinion. hm. you want me to guess which one is your perfect guy? but i'm slightly confused. this one is titled My Perfect Guy. so wouldnt this be him?

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

No, because all of the poems are written in the point of view, more or less, of the girl who's perfect guy it is. So, whether it says "my" or "I" has no effect. MWAHAHAHA! Anyway, yup, I can't wait to see what you thought of the last one!

Lionheart
(not registered user)

I didnt know girls were into that look, honestly O_O

Hmmm, i guess you have to be a particular kind of girl... Ok... my guess.... and i guess it is the..

Ok honestly i have no idea, i dont think i know you enough to know what you like... so i am going to guess the knight in shining armour... your response?;

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Hmmmm....that's weird that you think girls aren't into "that look" but that's OK I mean, people have different tastes I guess. Anyway, on I'll tell you what the answer is on your page.

another winner, lol. Man I wish I could write about the perfect guy and then BAM, he'd appear, lmao. You're poems make me wish that, haha. Well done once again. I'm off to read the others, haha
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

That would be soooo awesome...I'd probably write a lot more poems then...and about different things. I hope you like the other poems too!!!

aww this is really good!
it was realy cute and beautifully written
~mandy

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you soo much! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it ^.^



Add Your Comments:

Your Name:

Spam protection control::

© Copyright 2008 Hugs and kisses All rights reserved. Hugs and kisses has granted theNextBigWriter, LLC non-exclusive rights to display this work on Booksie.com.

About | News | Contact | Your Account | TheNextBigWriter | Advertise

© 2008 TheNextBigWriter, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Policy.