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First in a series of poems called "That Perfect Someone" all the poems are of (fictional) guys. They all are me trying to write poems about some of my friends perfect someone...some I just sort of guessed though. Oh! And try to guess which one is my perfect guy! (It won't be what you think) View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 18, 2008 Reads: 56 Comments: 5 Likes: 4
Golden brown hair like a perfect piece of toast,
Someone modest, someone who never boasts,
Eyes too mesmerizing to describe,
Eyes too mesmerizing to deny,
Sporty, flirty, flower bringing, song singing,
The lead singer, always, your voice with that perfect ring,
Someone to comforting when someone is down,
Who can make a smile out of a frown,
This is all that I ask for, it isn’t very much, is it?
Why is it that every boy I meet just doesn’t fit?
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why is it that every boy you meet just doesnt fit? good question lol. i have the same problem. haha. maybe guys just aren't cut out to be perfect. i dont think its in their nature. haha
liked it muchly.
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
Thanks for the vote of confidence hAhHAHAhAhHA!!!! Truth is... and this may shock the bananas out of you... guys arent perfect HAHAhAhAH!!!! We have dream girls too and they just dont exist :(
I really liked the lines:
"Eyes too mesmerizing to describe,
Eyes too mesmerizing to deny"
Nice short poem, now off to read the rest :D
Posted: Apr 19, 2008
ouuu, he sounds PERFECT! lmao. When I find one of them, I'll let yah know;) haha
Steph:)
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
too good.....hee heee...hee...i will make my hubby read this
Posted: May 24, 2008
He really does sound perfect - 'Why is it that every boy I meet just doesn’t fit?'
Keep up the great work
Olola
Posted: May 28, 2008
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