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That Perfect Someone (This Boy)

Poem By: Hugs and kisses
Romance


Second in a series of poems called "That Perfect Someone" all the poems are of (fictional) guys. They all are me trying to write poems about some of my friends perfect someone...some I just sort of guessed though. Oh! And try to guess which one is my perfect guy! (It won't be what you think) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 18, 2008    Reads: 66    Comments: 5    Likes: 4   


Laughter always surrounds this boy,

I think I’m kind of in love with this boy,

His chocolate brown hair, his calm grey eyes,

His jokes, his smile, his laugh, they all make me sigh,

The girls that line up in front of him make me want to scream,

But I know he’d follow me, through a forest, down a stream,

A ladies man, there is absolutely no doubt,

He’s the boy every single love poem is about,

And every song too, just because he’s him,

How does he do it? I know every time I’m with him.

Him who I’m yet to find, yet to hold,

Him who I’d search for through both hot and cold,

Him who I’m getting kind of impatient waiting for,

Him who I’ve never seen or heard of before.


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Comments:

aw another good one hon. hmmm. i haven't read all of them yet... but i think i can discard this one for being your perfect guy. but who knows. he just seems like the typical ladies man. hehe. well off to read more! *i like vote*

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

yay! You liked it, you gave it an "I liked it" vote! Anyway, I'm glad that your reading all of them, I really want to see if you guess the right person!

Hmmmm... I'm still thinking-- must read again and again!!!!!!!!! I've read all of them-- but I'll come back and give each and every one of them a humongous comment, and then I'll have only one guess... Although I'm still thinking... I'm kind've leaning towards this one for your person... I don't know...

Lot's of chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl:)!

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Hmmm...I won't write a long message just because it's the shortie one (you mentioned humongous comments) so guess away my friend!

Lionheart
(not registered user)

Wow, i really liked the way this turned out better than the last one. The flow was great, this was a good one, but i havent read the rest...
Favourite lines in this one:
"The girls that line up in front of him make me want to scream"
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"He’s the boy every single love poem is about"

Very well written, and those lines really sum up the kind of guy.... you know... i am a ladies man [winks].......or not.....

Great piece here, off to the next!

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey...I thought I replied to this...grrrr...anyway, I'm glad you liked it!!!!

awwww, he sounds cute. haha, I have to say, whoever this boii is that you're writing about (if he's real) GO FOR IT! haha, and if he's not real, START SEARCHING, lmao
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

lol none of them are real, Steph. But they're all like me or my friends "perfect guys" so this could either be mine or someone else's. Soooo...thanks, more hugs to you *hug*

* smiling affectionately.*

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

*smiles back* Thank you! I'm really happy you liked it!



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