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That Perfect Someone (You're Someone)

Poem By: Hugs and kisses
Romance


Fourth in a series of poems called "That Perfect Someone" all the poems are of (fictional) guys. They all are me trying to write poems about some of my friends perfect someone...some I just sort of guessed though. Oh! And try to guess which one is my perfect guy! (It won't be what you think) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 18, 2008    Reads: 79    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


You’re someone who’d climb through my window,

Just to comfort me when I’m too scared to sleep,

You’re someone who’d go with me to ski in the snow,

And somehow you know what to blab and what secret to keep,

You’re a someone with gorgeous blue-green eyes,

With more dark, midnight blue than green,

A mouth that is rarely mean, eyes that never lie,

And a smile more wicked, more beautiful than I’ve ever seen,

You’re kind and romantic, also funny as hell,

You play guitar, you’re in a rocking band,

Not only a boyfriend, but a good plain friend as well,

And all my little quirks you can somehow stand,

You’re as perfect as can be, someone I always yearn to kiss,

Then why, oh why in the world don’t you exist?


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Comments:

lovely! either this one or the previous one is my guesses on your perfect guy. ^^

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Well...I can't say the answer HERE because then everyone who read this would know...but I'll put the answer on your booksie page ^_^

Lionheart
(not registered user)

Hehehe, this one sounded more... fun. The rocker line especially hahahaha. Its hard to guess anything for me yet, but one more to go, lets see if my skills mean anything...

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Well...I think it's harder for guys to guess this sort of stuff (no offense or anything) it's just they generally get it wrong who likes who. And it's funny ^_^ but that's beside the point, I'm glad you liked it, and I really want to see which one you guess!

I'm having a hard time deciding which guy sounds better, lmao. ALL OF THEM COMBINED. ouu, that would be nice *whipes drule from mouth* haha.
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

lol that would be kinda weired and kinda cool, huh? Well, there's still one more. Wait. Or is it two more? Ummmm...I dunno. Well...there are still more.

I love the twist at the end. I ask myself this everyday.

Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading more in the series.

Olola.

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. This series of poems were a lot of fun to write, so I'm glad people seem to like them ^.^



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