Ugh. I feel really crummy, and I'm trying not to get my hopes up on this one guy who I like (he's the same boy who broke my heart. Go read Bravery Isn't Everything after this if you haven't read it yet.)

Well, I wrote this for him, and I hope that if he ever sees it he finally figures out what he did to me two and a half years ago when I first saw him... View table of contents...

Submitted: Sep 5, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   

The one who holds my heart

is one that I know.

The one with the chain

has use of a bow

~

But now the one who holds my heart

now holds the chain as well.

And to the one who held my chain,

I give a fond farewell.

~

For the one who holds my heart

now also holds the chain.

Keeping me bound to this earth

to keep me from flying away.

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Comments:

Catherine

:( sad. but REALLY good!

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

It's not really ment to be sad, but I guess you could see some sadness in it. You know that boy I've told you about? Same guy... ugh... TTYL

nuttyz

awww....this is so sad, but at the same time there is some happiness too(i guess). And I got what you were trying to say. :-)
But i like it!!XD

Great job.:D
Take care^_^

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! Your comments are greatly appreciated~!

Pratibha

So sad and cute too...u know what, lucky would be the boy who would be your man...

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you. I hope that he will come to me soon

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