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You stripped me down,
leaving me naked and exposed.
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Submitted: Sep 14, 2007 Reads: 99 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
Standing center stage,
flaunting freshly painted toes;
You stripped me down,
leaving me naked and exposed.
Trying to turn away,
hiding the things I fear to let you see.
Lustful stares from you, gives me back my beauty.
Urgently you devour me, almost suffocating.
My head, dizzy with desire...
I surrender.
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Lovely imagery of vulnerability in this piece... Nice read... love the ending. :)
Posted: Sep 14, 2007
I think this is great! I have had something like that happen to me and it was just him and I but he wanted one thing he got it then he left....He was my first! the first is always the hardest to let go!
Posted: Sep 14, 2007
Steamy! Love your play on words...excellent work Ivory!
Posted: Sep 15, 2007
I loved this. Seductive and alluring.
girlish
Posted: Oct 13, 2007
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