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Loveless Romance

Poem By: ixluvx2xwritex2
Romance


Tags: love

A love story that turns sour. This is in response to a challenge... Enjoy! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 1, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Why can’t you see,

That I love you the way you are?

Why don’t you believe,

We can make love go far?

You make my heart jump,

When it’s you I see.

I’m jealous,

When you don’t look at me.

Other girls,

Can gain your vote.

I’d never let you read,

All those letters I wrote.

My name is Jessica,

You seem not to care.

I veil my feelings from you,

Cause I’m scared.

I see the other girls,

Hang around you.

Like a vulture,

That will prey on, and subdue.

Tears fall,

From my eyes every night.

A jug is not big enough,

To contain this internal fight.

The day finally comes,

When you call my name.

I know that my life,

Will never be the same.

In no way are you,

The perfect love I dreamed.

No soulful vicar,

Whose soul is redeemed.

So,

Goodbye to you.

I will not waste my time,

If it’s not true.

I will not make you choose,

But I will leave.

You will never,

Make me believe.

Love is patient,

Love is kind.

I don’t believe,

I was so blind. 


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Comments:

Cool. like the last part

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I'm glad. I liked it too. It's in response to a challenge, but I dont know which one! oops! Thanks I'm so glad you liked it!



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