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Bah HumBug

Poetry By: JiDonnelly
Romance



my first love left just before our second christmas
i was gutted lol.


Submitted:Jul 16, 2011    Reads: 26    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


It was just that night on christmas eve

where i lay in my room

asking myself why i was taking time to grieve

knowing im going to see you soon

i just stared at the snow outside

its like i knew you were not coming already

despite that nasty feeling inside

i still got up and got ready

while the family lived up chirstmas i wanted to cry

with just a ten minate phonecall

you made my christmas spirit die

i just knew you would never come

now the family dont know if they are coming or going

without you i cant have fun

im still at the window and its still snowing

my first love and i mean that from the heart

you were the only thing on my list

always known first loves part

but my babe was gone before our second christmas.





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