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Awakening.

Poem By: jmevee
Romance


Tags: love, contentment

A perfect morning View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 30, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Awakening

 

That morning whisper

A gentle kiss

A suspended moment

Of perfect bliss

 

That precious feeling

As eyes first meet

Bodies entwined

In sleepy heat

 

Fingers touching

Breath as one

Hearts in rhythm

We greet the sun

 

Content, in truth

Just to be

Simply enjoying

You and me


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Comments:

A lovely piece, love the way it seems to flow. Great piece of art.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much.

i agree with whitehart aboove it does have a good flow to it, nice work

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks



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